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    Toursim

    Nowadays, tourism is one the most important (things /aspects) of a country 's economy. For this reason, it is (essential /necessary) that people takes tourism into account.  <*choose either essential or necessary>

    Sadly, in the last decade, Spain has suffered from a crisis which led to a downfall in its economic. Luckily, tourism is one of the industries that keeps it running. I believe that the relationship of the Spaniard with the foreigners are fantastic. For this question, usually, When a tourist returns home, he or she is thinking will think to visit of visiting Spain again.

    If you analyse the necessary conditions to offer a powerful tourism, Spain can has all. of them. We have a wonderful weather with all the seasons of the year and we gets to enjoy a great variety of food. In addition, you can visit a lot of cultural places and you would like to can relax in one of the beautiful natural parks.
    In my opinion, the  tourism must care because it is an important source  input of money for a country.

    Notes from me

    1. I feel that Aspects will be more appropriate than things in this situation. (You still can use things)  
    Here is a definition of Aspects : a particular part or feature of something.


    2. Spanish is already referring to the people of Spain. There is no need to add a "people" behind Spanish. Spanish people Alternatively, you can use Spaniard.

    3." behaviour with the foreign is fantastic." Behaviour refers to a conducts or the way people acts. I think what you are trying to say here is the results of how the Spanish reacts to the foreigners. In other words, it means the relationship between the foreigners and the Spanish. 

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    June 30, 2017
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    translate into English please

    20世纪后期,在世界科学技术发生巨大进步的背景下,在社会信息传播领域出现建立在数字技术基础上的新型媒体,



    In the late 20th century, with the advancement in technology, our communication in the society progressed and took on a new role in the new media.

    你要的是英文版本对吧?

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