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Nowadays, the tourism is one the most important things in the economy of a country. For this reason, it is essential that people know that is necessary taking into account the tourist.
Sadly, Spain suffered a hard economic crisis in this decade but luckily, the tourism was one of the industries that keeping run. I believe that the Spanish people behaviour with the foreigns is fantastic. For this question, usually, when a tourist is coming back to his home, he is thinking to visit Spain again.
If you analyze the necessary conditions to offer a powerful tourism, Spain can have all of them. We have a wonderful weather, all the seasons of the year and we enjoy with a fantastic food with a great variety of tastes. In addition, you can visit a lot of cultural places and you would like to relax in one of the beatiful natural parks.
In my opinion, the tourism must care because it is an important input of money for a country.
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Toursim
Nowadays, tourism is one the most important (things /aspects) of a country 's economy. For this reason, it is (essential /necessary) that people takes tourism into account. <*choose either essential or necessary>Sadly, in the last decade, Spain has suffered from a crisis which led to a downfall in its economic. Luckily, tourism is one of the industries that keeps it running. I believe that the relationship of the Spaniard with the foreigners are fantastic. For this question, usually, When a tourist returns home, he or she is thinking will think to visit of visiting Spain again.
If you analyse the necessary conditions to offer a powerful tourism, Spain can has all. of them. We have a wonderful weather with all the seasons of the year and we gets to enjoy a great variety of food. In addition, you can visit a lot of cultural places and you would like to can relax in one of the beautiful natural parks.
In my opinion, the tourism must care because it is an important source input of money for a country.
Notes from me
1. I feel that Aspects will be more appropriate than things in this situation. (You still can use things)Here is a definition of Aspects : a particular part or feature of something.
2. Spanish is already referring to the people of Spain. There is no need to add a "people" behind Spanish. Spanish people Alternatively, you can use Spaniard.
3." behaviour with the foreign is fantastic." Behaviour refers to a conducts or the way people acts. I think what you are trying to say here is the results of how the Spanish reacts to the foreigners. In other words, it means the relationship between the foreigners and the Spanish.
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Toursim
Nowadays, the tourism is one the most important things aspects (<--"Thing" is a word we want to avoid writing whenever possible.) in the economy of a country. For this reason, it is essential that people know that is necessary taking the needs of the tourist into account the tourist is necessary.
If you analyze the necessary conditions to offer a powerful tourism industry, Spain can have has all of them. We have a wonderful weather with all the four seasons of the year, and we enjoy with a fantastic food with a great variety of tastes. In addition, you (<--It's best to not use the generic/impersonal "you" when writing.) tourists can visit a lot of many (<--Use "many" instead of "a lot of" whenever possible.) cultural places, and you would like to they can also relax in one of the beautiful natural parks.
In my opinion, the tourism must care because it is an important input of money source of income for a country.
Nicely written, Joaquin! I enjoyed reading your writing. Keep practicing! =)
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Toursim
Nowadays, the tourism is one of the most important things (in the economy of a country) in a country's economy. For this reason, it is essential that people know that (is necessary taking into account the tourist)taking tourism into account is necessary.Sadly, Spain suffered a hard economic crisis in this decade, but luckily, the tourism was has been one of the industries that keeping are still running. I believe that the behaviour of Spanish people behaviour with the foreigns foreigners is fantastic. For this question, usually, when a tourist is coming back to his home, he is thinking to visit Spain again.
If you analyze the necessary conditions to offer a powerful tourism, Spain can have all of them. We have a wonderful weather, all the seasons of the year and we enjoy with a fantastic food with a great variety of tastes. In addition, you can visit a lot of cultural places and you would like to relax in one of the beatiful natural parks.
In my opinion, the tourism must care be taken care of, because it is an important input source of money for a country.
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