The first time <strike>to eat</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">eating</font> dumplings

Langston opened a Chinese restaurant and started business today. In order to celebrate this event, yesterday he invited us to his new restaurant to eat. When I got there, it was filled with people and everyone was happy. Langston <strike>used to come and said</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">came to us and said,</font> "You are just right, you have to eat." Several people enthusiastically shook my hand <font style="background-color: yellow;">and</font> some said<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> " You are the only one, you are come just arrival in right time." <font style="background-color: yellow;">"You are the only one. You have arrived at just the right time."</font>
At this time, the waiter began to clean up the table. <font style="background-color: yellow;">He</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">put down</font> a bowl and chopsticks, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">end up to Maotai and cold dishes</font> (I am not exactly sure what is trying to be said in the pink highlighted part). Everybody is doing well. "Let's drink! Let's have a taste of the Chinese dumplings, and<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> when the</font> guests eat more, then I will be happier!" People were drinking wine while talking about dumplings. Some people had <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">them </font>eaten before <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">and</font> they said there is a skin of flour on the outside <font style="background-color: inherit;"><strike>outside is the flour skin,</strike></font> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">and </font>inside is the meat and vegetables.<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> T</font>hey are very delicious. We did not eat dumplings <strike>who listened to these </strike><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">when we were listening,</font> and <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">so we are </font>really excited to eat dumplings as soon as possible!
<strike>Dumpling end up</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">The dumplings ended up being horrible!</font><strike> It was horrible!</strike> I cannot use chopsticks <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">even though </font>I tried my best. <strike>but I cannot use it.</strike> I looked <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">at the </font>dumplings and felt so anxious, and then I look<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ed</font> around <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">and saw </font>many people like me. We looked at each other and laughed! My friend suggested that we <strike>should</strike> use forks, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">and we </font>finally solved our problem. <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">For the people who </font>eat dumplings, praise them! Some people do not like salty <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">taste</font>, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">and so</font> they recommended that Langston put less salt in next time. <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">S</font>ome people also suggested that <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">he add </font>more vegetables, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 0, 255);">more less</font> (more or less?) meat. <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">S</font>ome people want to learn how to make dumplings. The whole room <strike>can be</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">was </font>lively until <strike>the </strike>midnight, <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">when </font>we said goodbye to Langston happily.

Great work!

Challenges

Challenges
Learning another language is not easy<font style="background-color: yellow;">. </font><font style="background-color: yellow;">T</font>here are many obstacles <font style="background-color: yellow;">and </font>small barriers, which for some are simple and futile, but for others they are true mountains. The challenges are <font style="background-color: yellow;">devarious (I feel like a better word would be unfair or sneaky), but</font> we can not be afraid to fall <font style="background-color: yellow;">(fail would work here, too) because</font> this is <font style="background-color: yellow;">a </font>part of learning. <font style="background-color: yellow;">G</font>etting up is what makes us different. <font style="background-color: yellow;">T</font>oday I'm getting up again for a new challenge<font style="background-color: yellow;">:</font> <font style="background-color: yellow;">l</font>earn the English language, and if you can help me I will be very grateful.

Help me to correct my mistakes. Thank you.

Very well-written!

Tour de France

A couple of days ago, I watched a video of a <strike>cycle road</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">road cycling</font> race on Youtube without any particular reason.
I was not looking for it at all.
It was on the recommendation list somehow.
I guess it was because Tour de France is being held very soon.
It was not the first time <strike>for me to watch that</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">that I had watched a road cycling</font> race but I hadn't watched<strike> them</strike> one <strike>for</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">in</font> a long time.
The race <strike>of the video</strike> was in Italy.
I was impressed <strike>by</strike> its the beautiful views <font style="background-color: yellow;">(you could also say "scenery")</font>
Then I watched some other videos of <font style="background-color: yellow;">road cycling</font>  races and I <strike>came</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">began</font> to want to watch this year's Tour de France.
It is going to start on July 1st, but it is not being broadcasted for free in Japan <font style="background-color: yellow;">(When writing, it is better to not start a sentence with "but").</font>
To watch <strike>them</strike> it (assuming that you are referring to only the Tour de France) I need to subscribe <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font> a charged channel which costs 1800 yen, but I think it is worth paying money.
Many riders wear<strike>ing</strike> a colorful jersey, riding <font style="background-color: yellow;">as they ride</font> a cool bicycle <strike>running</strike> through beautiful views.
It is so nice to see.

Excellent job!!! :)

Describing a National Geographic Photo

In this photo, there is a lot of blue. People are crossing a bridge. The bridge is so narrow that people have to cross this bridge one by one.
This photo had been taken at the end of the day. People were going home after work. These five people went home with their harvests to sell at the market tomorrow. This photo is as beautiful as a painting and looks very quiet (I believe this is what you were trying to say). When I see this photo, I also feel quiet. The photo expresses a concern for humanity.

Practicing my English

I often read my English speaking friends' posts on Facebook and almost always understand all the posts. However, it is very difficult when they speak because most of the time I don't understand anything. They speak very quickly. I have friends in the USA, Philippines, Ghana, Kenya and Japan. Often times I can understand when my friends speak American English, but is very complicated when I speak with my friends from Ghana or Kenya because they have different phonetics.

Thanks for reading and correcting