The first time to eat dumplings
Langston opened a Chinese restaurant and started business today. In order to celebrate this event, yesterday he invited us to his new restaurant to eat. When I got there, it was filled with people and everyone was happy. Langston used to come and said: "You are just right, you have to eat." Several people enthusiastically shook my hand, some said: " You are the only one, you are come just arrival in right time.
At this time, the waiter began to clean up the table, put a bowl and chopsticks, end up to Maotai and cold dishes. Everybody is doing well. "Let's drink! Let's have a taste of the Chinese dumplings, and guests eat more, then I will be happier!" People were drinking wine while talking about dumplings. Some people had eaten before, they said the outside is the flour skin, inside is the meat and vegetables, they are very delicious. We did not eat dumplings who listened to these, and really excited to eat dumplings as soon as possible!
Dumpling end up. It was horrible! I cannot use chopsticks, I tried my best but I cannot use it. I looked dumplings and felt so anxious, and then I look around, many people like me. We looked at each other and laughed! My friend suggested that we should use forks, finally solved our problem. People eat dumplings, praise them! Some people do not like salty, they recommended that Langston put less salt in next time, some people also suggested that more vegetables, more less meat; some people want to learn how to make dumplings. The whole room can be lively, until the midnight, we said goodbye to Langston happily.
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Dumpling end up. 不懂这句. 看了下文, 大慨知你想要说什么. It was horrible! As I started to eat, I realized that I was in a predicament! I cannot 不是不可以, 只是不会 don't know how to use chopsticks. I tried my best but alas... I cannot use it. I looked at the dumplings sheepishly; and felt so anxious, so far and yet so near. and then I look ed around and some of us were in the same situation. , many people like me. We looked at each other and suddenly broke out into laughter. laughed! My friend 上面你沒有描写你们是朋友, 这样写法不须用拖泥帶水去說 Someone suggested that we should use forks, finally to solve our problem. People eat dumplings As we ate, we sang the praises of its delectability them! Some people do not like found it was too salty [to their taste], and suggested not too heavy on the they recommended that Langston put less salt in next time, some people also suggested that more vegetables, more less instead ; while others wanted to know the recipe. some people want to learn how to make dumplings. The whole room can be lively, 这样说是那间房室是愉快而不是室裡的人 until the Everyone had a great/wonderful time until midnight, when we had to say said goodbye to Langston happily. 这样說是你们很乐意可以离开 Langstron.
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The first time to Eat Dumplings at the First Time at Langstrom's
Langston opened a Chinese restaurant and started business today. In order To celebrate this event, yesterday he invited us to his new restaurant yesterday to eat. When I arrived, the place was crowded got there, it was filled with people 这样的写法是說猪猪狗狗也可以去and everyone's mood was good happy. 不可以用詞, 好像小朋友在学校裡的快快乐乐的气氛 Langston used to come 他剛剛开長 怎会是曾经來过? came over and greeted said: "You are just right, you have to eat. 你是对的, 你一定要吃??? 应该是, You arrived just in time to eat." Several people came and enthusiastically 非亲非故, 你也不是什么大人物 shook my hand warmly some and said: " You are the only one, you are come just arrival in right time. = 只有你一个来的着时??? 看来其他人是 Langston 请来的貴賓, We are all here in time and let's sit down.1
The first time to eat eating dumplings
At this time, the waiter began to clean up the table. He put down a bowl and chopsticks, end up to Maotai and cold dishes (I am not exactly sure what is trying to be said in the pink highlighted part). Everybody is doing well. "Let's drink! Let's have a taste of the Chinese dumplings, and when the guests eat more, then I will be happier!" People were drinking wine while talking about dumplings. Some people had them eaten before and they said there is a skin of flour on the outside
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As they spoke, a At this time, the waiter began to came andcleaned up the table; placing , put a bowl and chopsticks afterwards. , end up to There was also a Maotai and a few cold appetizers being served on the table. dishes. Everybody is looking forward to the dining experience doing well. "Let's have a toast drink! Let's have a Taste of the Chinese 前面已經描写了是个中式酒楼 dumplings, and guests eat more, then I will be happier and I will be most happy if you find them delicious if you eat more !" People were drinking We sipped our wine while talking and raved about the dumplings. Some people had eaten them before, they said the outside is the flour skin, inside is the meat and vegetables, they 不可这样写, 意义是藐視他们, 不知到水餃是什么东西 said they were very delicious; the doughy skin was light and the meat and vegetable fillings were excellent. We did not eat the dumplings who while listening to these idle banter as we eagerly in wait , and really excited to eat the dumplings as soon as possible!
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