fin de vacances

Il ne reste plus que deux jours de nos vacances. Nous avons passé deux superbes semaines chez mes grands-parents  bien que ce soit un peu difficile des fois  de vivre avec toute la famille sous  le même toit (un seul toit). C’était dommage que l’hôtel dans Manitowaning soit plein jusqu'à la date de notre voyage de retour. J’aurais aimé y séjourner. D’un autre côte, peut-être que nous devrions (souffler?) un peu plus et prendre une pause après avoir beaucoup voyagé. Je trouve que les enfants deviennent de plus en plus fatigués au fur et à mesure que les vacances passent.

J'espère que mes corrections vont vous aider, si jamais vous avez besoin d'aide n'hésitez pas de me contacter!

[Second Day Part-Three]

I went to Nan Lian Garden. It was a beautiful garden with a big pond and a very beautiful golden temple. The whole garden was perfectly looked after and spotlessly cleaned especially the plants that were  under the management of the Hong Kong government. The entrance was free.

Then, I went to Kowloon Walled City Park, it was called the Kowloon Walled City until 1997. I checked the some websites and the history of this place and found it really interesting. I saw several pictures, which were exhibited in the building.

I hope my corrections help you! Good luck with your studies and if you ever need help don't hesitate to ask !  :)

A tribewanted project

If you want to feel new emotions, you have to read this adverstisement which explains how to become a part of something amazing.
firstly, we are looking for people who are adventurous and prefer to live without tecnology.
We need people who want to learn customs from one of the most remote communities on Earth.
In addition to this, your responsibilities on the islans will include:
help to build new houses, work in a team to collect food.
Also, you will need to teach them something about the modern world for example one recipe to cook fish (plural of fish is still fish) or something similar to this.
The community will teach you how to enjoy the life in a different way.
By the end of your stay you will be a new person.
If you are interested, please send an email at: [email protected]
Other information which you want to know, only ask us. You can ask us about any other information that may interest you.

Hope my corrections help you and if you ever need anything else I would be glad to help again! Best Regards, Fidan!

Au sujet de mon choix de matières principales.

Quand j’avais dix-huit ans, je ne savais pas ce que je voulais étudier à l'université. Il me semblait que Tous mes amis savaient ce qu’ils voulaient étudier. C’était comme si la décision était très facile pour tout le monde sauf moi. Heureusement, j’avais la sagesse nécessaire de comprendre que c’était imprudent de s'inscrire à l'université sans réfléchir, tout simplement parce-que c’était attendu de moi que je le fasse. Franchement, j’étais content d’avoir fini l’école secondaire, et je n’étais pas pressé d’y retourner. Pour les quatre ans suivants, j’ai travaillé dans une usine de textiles. C’était dégueulasse  et le travail était fatiguant. J’ai compris que je dois retourner à l’école, puisque je pourrais trouver un meilleur emploi. J’ai choisi la psychologie, et la criminologie comme mes matières principales parce-que je voulais apprendre plus sur soi-même (mes motivations, désirs, et intérêts), et parce-que mon frère étudiait la criminologie, et je pensais que c’était très intéressant. Je ne regrette pas ma décision, mais parfois je pense que j’aurais dû étudier le français, parce-que cette langue m'intéresse beaucoup (j’ai très intéressé dans le français), et je suis déçu qu’après 14 ans en école, je parle encore à peine le français.. ☹

Bonjour, j'ai trouvé votre histoire très interessante car j'ai aussi étudié la psychologie à l'université! Je vous conseil de ne jamais se décourager! Votre niveau de la langue française est déjà satisfaisant et je suis sûre que avec un peu de travail vous pouvez l'améliorer encore plus! Je suis à votre disposition si vous avez besoin de l'aide! Je vous souhaite bonne chance et bonne continuation! Meilleurs salutations, Fidan!

about myself

Hello everyone.My name is Mikasa Thu Tran, I'm a student and currently I'm studying in college.Today is my (the) first day on the (I participe in) Italki platform, I'm very happy (or you can say: impatient) to become friends with you guys and I hope that I will be able to improve my English and Japanese. I hope that everyone who knows English or Japanese languages will help me improve my English or Japanese. NICE TO MEET YOU! (I would put nice to meet you after Hello everyone)

Hello! Welcome to Italki! It is nice to meet you too! I speak english and would be glad to assist you if you need any help! Best Regards, Fidan!

I wrote this little article about cooperation and competition, who want to check it? thanks

COOPERATION OR COMPETITION?
What is the best way (of teaching how) of behaving in the world of work: create a sense of cooperation or competition? People often say that the best way is the first: cooperation.
My point of view is different: we should create an environment where there are both competition and cooperation. Why is competition  important? When people, especially young people, compete they tend to be more motivated to complete their tasks or jobs, that is why we obviously need positive competition. A positive competition stimulates people to give the best of them, it is positive when there is also cooperation. ( But the presence of cooperation also has a positive influence).
In my opinion to prepare young people in the best manner  it’s important that they participate in team games during their training. A kind of game where one team compete's with others, the participants will compete and will do their best to win, but without team work they wouldn't be able to accomplish their objective, in this way they will learn that (the) cooperation is fundamental to achieve their goals (reach that target).
It’s true when people say, “cooperation is more important than cooperation” but this doesn’t mean that we shouldn’t use both for our aim.

Hello! Here is a little correction of your text! In my opinion both cooperation and competition should co-exist so I agree with you ! I believe in healthy competition and that friendly competition doesn't hurt! Hope my correction helps! Best Regards, Fidan!

Climbing in Northern Japan

My wife likes to climb mountains. After marrying her, she often took me with her. One day, we went to climb a mountain in Hokkaido. It was an active volcano, which was about 2000m heigh. The climb was a lot of fun. There were many beautiful views and the summit was so quiet that we could (cure our fatigue) have a proper rest. However, suddenly, an earthquake occured(happened). Although it wasn't big, we were scared that an eruption may follow. We went down the mountains as quick as possible. It took us two times less time to reach the starting point of the trail than it took us to climb up. We were relieved and returned to our hotel.

Thank you for sharing such an interesting story! Hope my few corrections help you! Best Regards, Fidan!

Wow Bulgaria sounds beautiful the way you describe it! I didn't know that it's the country of roses ! I visited Cyprus recently and fell in love ! The weather, the people, the food everything was just GREAT! Really recommend it! :)