travelling Travelling in Shanghai

Shanghai is one of the largest cities in the world. Many tourists come to visit Shanghai every year. There are many interesting places in Shanghai. If you go there, you will see a huge open area with green grass, trees, fountains and pigeons. You will find Shanghai Grand Theatre and Shanghai Museum there. You can go to the The Bund to enjoy the night views and see the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
There are many restaurants and shops there. You can eat different local snacks. If you want to do some shopping., You you can go to Nanjing Road. It is the best place for shopping. You can see many nice shops and department stores. You can buy everything you want. Shanghai is a wonderful place for travelling. The people in Shanghai are very kind and helpful. I hope you'll have a good time in Shanghai.

Remember to leave a space after each punctuation mark. :)

SUBWAY

I live in canton Canton,  that is one of the largest citycities of in China. There are more than 2 million people who live and work here. we  We have a large and convenient public transportation system. we We can easy easily access to the whole city by via the subway. the other question is that if you want to get in a subway is a tough work . However, it is hard/tough to get on the subway during peak hours. The crowed wait for the train and rush into the carrige in the peak time.I donnot mean they get in the train in procession. The crowd does not queue for the train and rushes in as soon as it arrives.  i I often avoid the peak hour as soon as possible.Today i finished my english class then i go home by the subway even have a seat. Today, I took the subway after my English class and managed to get a seat. I have had a nice day.

Some things to take note of:

- use capital letters at the start of each sentence 

- use capital letters for name of places (eg. Canton/English)

DATE：28, JUNE,2017

Morning, In the morning, I bought a cup of coffee in the at 7-11.
I wanted to save(convert/change) $100 into I-cash, so I took gave $1000 for to the worker(employee),
but he forgot took to return $900 for to me and me, I did not realise it too.
In the afternoon, I remembered  and run to the went back to 7-11.
He took returned $900 for to me！ So lucky.

The Satay in Singapore [Picture twenty four] part two

Would you mind correcting my sentences? If you were me, how would you go about describing a photo?

[Picture twenty four] part two

The restaurant serves the several kinds of meats of satays. I ordered only the chicken of satays. The satays was were sweet and sumptuous,. Also the  The peanut sauce is delicious too. I've had a skewered chicken once in a while in Japan which wasn't sweet like it but it wasn't sweet like these satays.

I stepped by into this restaurant after checked checking in at a hotel late in the afternoon. I was walking around near the hotel, then when I was attracted by a savory smell and the nice atmosphere of the restaurant.

I highly recommend to have Satay having satay at the al fresco dining restaurants (or restaurants that offer al fresco dining) when you'll visit in Singapore. 

I love satay too! :) 

I'm gonna tell you something

Today. , I had an English and Spanish conversation with a friend. She lives in Giorgia Georgia and She's she's very cool. She told me she is studying Spanish because Mexican Culture likes to her she likes Mexican culture. She says Mexican Culture culture is very interesting. Then she told me that she has eaten some tamales, they're very delicious. She told me she likes to travel a lot too. I'm afraid I had made many mistakes when talking in English but I think this is the only way that I'll to learn it. I want to tell you that in my all entries, I don't prefer to use Google Translate. I prefer to write some lines with I've been learning about studying in English.

新的句子用生词在（）

他被我的电脑坏了。我的电脑被他弄坏了。(被)

我的父母使要我考研普通初中的入学考试。(使)

（听音乐能使我放松心情。）

我的哥哥比我聪明。(比)

他的朋友稍微有点奇怪。(稍微)

（你的音乐开的太大声了，能稍微把音量调小吗？）

这个电影十分有意思。(十分)

我的朋有友比较多。(比较)

加油！:)