SUBWAY I live in canton that is one of the largest city of China. There are more than 2 million people who live and work here. we have large and convenient public transportation. we can easy ac

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SUBWAY I live in canton that is one of the largest city of China. There are more than 2 million people who live and work here. we have large and convenient public transportation. we can easy access to the whole city by the subway. the other question is that if you want to get in a subway is a tough work .The crowed wait for the train and rush into the carrige in the peak time. I donnot mean they get in the train in procession. i often avoid the peak hour as soon as possible.Today i finished my english class then i go home by the subway even have a seat .I have a nice day.

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SUBWAY

I live in canton Canton, that is one of the largest citycities of in China. There are more than 2 million people who live and work here. we We have a large and convenient public transportation system. we We can easy easily access to the whole city by via the subway. the other question is that if you want to get in a subway is a tough work . However, it is hard/tough to get on the subway during peak hours. The crowed wait for the train and rush into the carrige in the peak time.I donnot mean they get in the train in procession. The crowd does not queue for the train and rushes in as soon as it arrives. i I often avoid the peak hour as soon as possible.Today i finished my english class then i go home by the subway even have a seat. Today, I took the subway after my English class and managed to get a seat. I have had a nice day.

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I live in canton Guangzhou, which that is one of the largest city cities in of China. There are more than 2 two-million people who live and work here. We have a large and convenient public transportation system. We can easy easily access to the whole city by the subway. the other question is that if you want to On the other hand, getting on in a the subway is a tough work. The crowed Crowds wait for the train and rush into the carriages during in the peak times. I donnot do not mean they queue up to get in on the train in procession. I often avoid the peak hours as soon much as possible. Today I finished my English class then i go and then went home by the subway, even have finding a seat. I have had a nice day.

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