listening to music in a bus

Almost everyday, I commute from my home to a library in a university. It takes about 30~40 minutes, and sometimes the trip makes me bored. When I feel bored, I put on my earphones and turn on my favorite songs. In the morning, I listen to bright and exciting songs because I can get(have?) positive emotions (Note: use the plural form because you said "songs" earlier) by from them. (아니면 이렇게 쓸 수 입니다: In the morning, I listen to songs that make me happy.) On the other hand, I listen to crashing loud rock songs- compared to the songs in the morning - (그것은 정학하지만, 쪼끔 반복적인/repetitive 문장이에요.) at night in a the bus. When I listen to these songs, I feel as there are no other stimuli such as optic and acoustic stuffs. ( I don't understand what you mean in this sentence.)I sometimes imagine the a scene that where the band is playing the song instruments are playing them, or the a scene where I play some the instruments with my friends. Time flows flies by very fast and I finally eventually have to get down off at a the bus stop near my house (제 생각에는 "house"가 여기에서 더 마자요.) home. It makes me happy , but sometimes I used to forget to get off getting down of the bus because of the song. Nowadays I become to want to learn how to playing piano.

Internet Abuse: Causes and Effects

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I have to do an essay for my English class! I hope could you help to correct my mistakes! Thank you!!

Internet Abuse: Causes and Effects

In the last decade there has been an increase in the use of the internet. Although it’s a very useful medium (Note: en mi opinion, la palabra mejor es "medium" si usted quiere decir "los medios de comunicación") for everyone, it has provoked negative aspects in the life of some people, especially between in the life of the teenagers.

There is a big difference between the appropriate use of the internet and the abuse inappropriate of the internet. Inappropriate use is I mean when the internet becomes an addiction.

Some people waste a lot of time on the internet and they forget their normal activities which causes causing lessdecreased productivity.
This type of problem is more usual between common among teenagers due because we spend a lot of time in on social networks  social media ("social media" es la palabra más frecuente que "social networks"), chats etc, and we forget to do other things.

This causes us to that we can’t pass time spend less time with our family and friends, we forget the forget our schoolwork, or even we forget of ourselves, neglecting our personal aspect.

Excessive use of the internet can bring health problems also. Many people can develop depression, anxiety or other psychological problems.

In summary we can say that the excessive use of the internet can bring serious consequences to a person. It’s for that very reason that it is very important that we learn to control the time we spend on the internet and use it properly.           

Wow! Este composición es muy buena y informativa! Hay algunos errores de gramática y errores de usos de las palabras. Pero en general, puedo comprender la mayor de la composición. Lo siento para mi español mal :)