Today`s results

So, I have a very interesting case today and I learnt a one thing. If you wanna speak fluently and train your brains to mode to (learn a) strange language, you have to be a spontanius (spontaneous). So, it means that you cannot think (of) every details and words before you speak. Even though you are unsure (of) how your sentences and tenses sounds. There is no fast way to happiness and success rather you have to brave your mind and open your mouth and let your words flow like a river...I personally noted that works.

So, the other case I found out was that I hate grammar. I downloaded from the net couple Power Point presentations, concerning English grammar and past tenses and so on. I hated grammar in elementary school and there is no changes about it nowadays. So, what would be the key of this prob? I hope, from bottom of my heart, that I could approve practical training and reading of books for this case. For this I mean, that if I use language enough, read books, listen my Italki-friends and this way modify my brain, I learn naturally (the) right way to use grammar. Without any nasty, boring hours (in) front of (a) laptop.

So, that was my thoughts from this day and this text was written (in a) naturally way without a dictionary. Let your mind flow...

Can you correct my mistakes, please?

Informal letter
You are going to a concert this evening with a group of friends and want to ask your English friend Peter to come too.
Write a letter to leave for Peter. In your letter, you should:
- ask Peter to join you at the concert this evening
- explain where the concert will take place
- tell Peter what sort of music will be performed

Hi Peter,
I am writing this letter to ask you if you want (wanted) to come with us to a pop concert this evening.
Last week, my school friends and I bought five tickets to enjoy of conciert (concert) of a well-known band of music called “The sun”. However, today my friend Patrick tell (told) me that he isn’t going to go to (the) concert of this evening because he is ill and his doctor recommend(ed) that he doesn’t go out until he feel(s) good.
Because of this, I would like to invite you to come with us because I know you really like to go with friends to concerts, also you love pop music, such as we are going to hear this evening.
What’s more, the concert will be at a stadium near of my home (house), so you can to stay (the night) in my house to sleep, if you want.
Anyway, I hope your answer as soon as you can.
Love,
Brenda.