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第一篇文章。 我简单的介绍自己。
我的名字是 Greg。今年五十四岁了。我住在澳大利亚墨尔本。我在计算机领域工作。我是一名计算机程序员。我这份工作已经做了二十年多了。
我家有四口人。我妻子,两个孩子和我。我两个孩子们都长大了。第一个是儿子,今年二十四多岁了。两年前大学毕业后就开始工作了。第二个孩子是女儿, 现在正在读书。她应该明年会毕业。我们还有一只小狗儿,它有点调皮。当有人来到我们的家,它一定会吵吵闹闹,使得我很烦。
我的爱好是看电视和听音乐。我也喜欢跟太太一起出去吃小吃。但是,大多数时间我喜欢在家看电视,特别是冬天。因为我是印度人,我当然喜欢吃印度菜。比如羊肉咖喱和鸡肉咖喱。也喜欢吃中国菜比如饺子,面条,烤猪肉和烤鸭。
空闲时,我也很喜欢学中文。但是我需要练习更多。
这是我简单的介绍自己。请帮我修改。谢谢您。修改如下:
我的名字是 Greg,今年五十四岁。我住在澳大利亚墨尔本。我在计算机领域工作,是一名计算机程序员。我这份工作已经做了二十年多。
我家有四口人,我妻子,两个孩子和我。我两个孩子都长大了。第一个是儿子,今年二十四岁了。两年前大学毕业后就开始工作了。第二个孩子是女儿, 现在正在读书。她应该明年会毕业。我们还有一只小狗儿,它有点儿调皮。当有人来到我们的家,它一定会吵吵闹闹,使得我很烦。
我的主要爱好是看电视和听音乐。我也喜欢跟太太一起出去吃小吃。但是,大多数时间我喜欢在家看电视,特别是冬天。因为我是印度人,我当然喜欢吃印度菜,比如羊肉咖喱和鸡肉咖喱;也喜欢吃中国菜比如饺子,面条,烤猪肉和烤鸭。
空闲时,我也很喜欢学中文,但是我需要更多的练习。
修改了一点点,自我介绍写得不错!0 votedJuly 11, 20171和我的朋友们有一个见面
上个礼拜我比较忙。工作很多,而且有些家庭职责。但是星期五我开车去南莫拉维亚看朋友们。咱们是五个朋友。大学时候我们一起住在一套学生宿舍公寓。现在,虽然我们都住在各种的地方,但是每年我们聚会在一起。一般, 我们在一个南莫拉维亚小村见面。南莫拉维亚是一个葡萄酒有名的地区。那里的气候对葡萄好处。在这个小村里住着一个朋友(1)。他的家有一个酒窖和他生产自己的葡萄酒。那聚会我们喝被这个朋友做的葡萄酒, 吃东西和聊天。
(1) – how to say “ One of the five friends lives in that village”?
修改如下:上个礼拜我比较忙。工作很多,而且有些家庭职责。但是星期五我开车去南莫拉维亚看朋友们。咱们是五个朋友。大学时候我们一起住在一套学生宿舍公寓。现在,虽然我们都住在各种的地方,但是每年我们聚会在一起。一般, 我们在一个南莫拉维亚小村见面。南莫拉维亚是一个葡萄酒有名的地区。那里的气候对葡萄好处。在这个小村里住着一个朋友(1)。他的家有一个酒窖和他生产自己的葡萄酒。那聚会我们喝被这个朋友做的葡萄酒, 吃东西和聊天。聚会很愉快,很难忘。<o:p></o:p>
0 votedJuly 6, 20171- About Happiness In the film <The pursuit of happiness>, director said a words full of philosophy: happiness own me , it have no "why". Happiness needn,t reason. He feel it then he get it, needn't to ask why. Have a good day! this is the most common use of good wish greeting between people. Everyone has eager to get happiness, everyday they are searching happiness, every hour and every minutes they all experienced it and feeded it. Happiness can appear in thousands of forms, everyone has himself happiness, only himself feel it most, happiness forever changes, yesterday's happiness may change taste in today. Bump in at a most unexpected moment, may make people enormous sweet sorrow. Some time creep its way into your life, make people feel it so suntle that it almost seems nonexistent. Unexpected happiness is rare. Plain happiness arises from every conner of life. It waits to be discovered and experienced by a sensitive heart. While looking for happiness , one must enjoy life itsself. It's most importent to feel happy deep in the soul.
July 5, 201710 - Baoyu&Daiu Talking about Reading Baoyu: Why are there all of books in your living room here and there? Are these books your favorite books? Daiyu: Certainly, I am going to read every day. Except they are common magazine or famous novel, just open them, you will find that there are so many interesting things in the world, there are so many different life in the world. Baoyu: You work so busy that you still keep reading every day is out of my mind. Daiyu: If you expend 3 minutes to read one page, half hour you will read 10 pages. Every day if you expend half hour to read, one month you will finish 300 pages, it close to one book. Baoyu:Yes, one man who truly like reading always find a time to read. Daiyu: Keep reading, including improve your knowledge, still help us decrease pressure, people will get relax. According to investigate, person who have good read ability easy to find job, and his salary also higher. Baoyu:How to improve the reading ability? Daiyu:Make record of reading is one of good ways. There are many ways to make Reading note ,the most simple way is writing down what you think it’s your favorite or useful .On the another side, after finish a book or an article, you may write down it’s main contents or your thinking. But you could not believe the contents of book, you should have your own minds and judgment. Keep making read note will benefits to your reading ability. Baoyu:It looks like there are many benefits of reading, it will enrich your knowledge, let you find a way to solve problem; at the same time, it enrich your feeling, make your life more wonderful. So you should get a good habit of “like to read, read a good book”.
June 28, 201700 - 中文小诗一首Chinese little poem one 圆天盖着大海 黑水拖着孤舟 远看不见山 那天边只有云头 也看不见树 那水上只有海鸥 Round sky covered the wide sea Black water put the lonely boat Looking far away and couldn't see the mountain There is only cloudy in the side of the sky Could not see the tree also There is only a seagulls flying on the water.
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