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    my first try at introducing myself in japanese こんにちは わたしは クリスチャンさん 導入 です hello my name is Christian i would like to introduce myself きて いる おらんだ に すんで います i live in the Netherlands よんじゅういちさいです i am 41 years old さんにん こども たち i have 3 kids これは むずかし しかし 頑張る this is difficult but i will keep going thank you so much for reading
    September 21, 2017
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    For the health.

    Could you please check my text? Thank you!

    I saw on TV that carbohydrates are important for a good balanced diet.
    I have to take more fiver fiber too. Because it's crucial for regulating the digestive system.
    Milk is packed full of calcium. But it has high calories. So I've been taken it less than last month.

    milk is high in calcium and has lot's of calories so i drank less last month.
    Every meal is important for the your diet health and some exercise is also necessary for the good diet good for your health

    hope this helps

    頑張って!!


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    September 21, 2017
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    September 20, 2017
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    My "DragonQuestXI" progress.

    A month has passed since I played the measure title DragonQuestXI  .
    I have being stood at climax of intermediate of was halfway through the game.
    Suddenly, My "PlayStation 4" ejected out the blue-ray disk with a beeping sound.
    The TV screen show showed the system menu instead of the battle scene.
    I was stunned with shock for a while.
    then I pulled myself together and continued the game.
    now There was no longer hatred against the enemy monster then.
    Because I was filled with anger to the towards the manufacturer.


    hope you had saved the game 8)

    成功 !


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    September 18, 2017
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    Respect for the aged day (Keiro No Hi)

    September 18th is a national holiday called "Keiro No Hi" in Japan. "Keiro" means that we should pay our respect for aged people. It appears that aged people are respected in Japan, but it is not the case actually but that is actually not the case .

    9月18日は「敬老の日」という名称の国民の休日です。「敬老」とは、高齢者に敬意を払う、という意味です。日本では、高齢者は尊敬されているように見えますが、実際には違います。
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    September 18, 2017
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    The typhoon

    The typhoon passed by our town last night. Fortunately the center of the typhoon was a bit far from our city. Nevertheless, there was a lot of rain in a short time, the large river in the vicinity exceeded the flood dangerous water overflow area and was reported in national news. Water accumulated  on the streets in some places the pouring rain flooded some streets , and I saw people walking by immersing in around with the water to the their knees. But luckily my house stands little away from the city center of the city and with a little high altitude and on higher ground. So my house was safe. This time the wind was not so strong here as we worried thought . That is one reason why there was not any damage here. However, I knew saw on TV, that there were lots of damages at other places. I feel very sorry for the people who suffered damages. Climate changes markedly shows its impact year by year. I can’t help being pessimistic if I think about what is going on to happen after five years.


    hope this helps 

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    September 18, 2017
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    Vocabulary

    Hi, there

    1I was reading Dracula, and there is a passage that reads
    " One of my companions touched my arm as we swept around the base of a hill and opened up the lofty, snow-covered peak of a mountain..."
    What's the subject of "opened up" here's? Shouldn't it be "and there opened up"?

    i find this very difficult indeed i could be wrong but here goes

    the "there" you are speaking of is "the base of a hill" 

    because when they rounded the corner at that base of the hill it is there that the full view opened up

    this means that "there" is of no use anymore because it implies "at the base off the hill"


    2) Hi, there

    Would you help me with two questions? Please!

    2) On many websites, I found that you can invert the subject and the verb of a sentence when you put an adverbial expression of place at the beginning of the sentence.
    Like: Round the corner came the knights.

    In a book, I've come across (or I CAME ACROSS??)
    "From the dark space in her folds there flowed a slow and heavy black liquid."
    My question is: isn't "from the dark space" an adverbial expression? Why "there" before "flowed" then? Why not "from the dark space in her folds flowed..."?

    again very difficult "From the dark space in her folds there flowed a slow and heavy black liquid."  sounds correct but "there" is not needed (but still correct though)

    since "From the dark space in her folds flowed a slow and heavy black liquid." sounds also grammatically correct

    hope this helps you a step further
    Please!!



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    September 17, 2017
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    Does anyone have a bulldozer?

    The town changed. The huge buildings with mirror-plated windows hulk hulked up among the old houses. And they seems seemed to squeeze frightenedly  frighteningly into the ground.
    "Hey, you! Yes, it's me. Look up! I'm here. Move your ass!" , the big ugly Marriott hotel is looking looked down impudently at the vintage house houses.
    "Who is it?", the surrounding houses murmured.
    How wonderful was the life without that huge disgusting ice block! But it is there now. And we cannot do something for saving those poor old houses... If only bulldozer can help us :)

    what an interesting story is it from a book?

    hope this helped 8)

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    September 17, 2017
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    How did I meet you?

    Today, Im gonna write about my girlfriend because we already are together for 2 years and 6 months. I knew met her when I was 22 years old on 17th March in 2015. She was in  at a party in Valencia's city center and I went there because I gonna listan  wanted to see a music group. She was with her friends and I knew one of them so our friend introduces introduced us. I was talking to her for many hours, more and less from 12pm until 4am. The night was perfect, we had fun and decided to meet up another day to talk more and get to  know each other. That day was one of the most important days in my life since I knew the best person that I have ever known.

    From that day, we started a relationship and are living happily together and now we still are together and very happy. We have fun every day that we are together and we have a lot of stuff in common. We go do jogging many days, go skating and more... Currently, she is studying to become Spanish teacher and she helps foreign people to learn Spanish every Saturday. She wishes to finish her studies in order to open her own Spanish academy. The truth is that I'm proud of her!

    Regarding our relationship, as I have told before we are very happy together and I love her. I fell in love when I knew her. In addition, we think in about our future every day and we expect to rent a flat soon because we are still living in with our parents' home and we need ("want" is possible here) more privacy. We have many plans for the future as you can see and our life cannot be better. Because of I'm i am a software developer, we can mix both of our studies to do something brilliant and useful for learners and specially for children. Our sooner immediate goal is to think about a new mobile application that helps young people to find interesting things when they try to learn learning a new language. It's important that children don't find boring learning learning boring. As we know many of problems that a children can find have learning a new language, we think that our knowledge can be useful for them and to do the make life ("learning" is possible here) easier than ever.

    In this text, I have tried to explain you that it is quite important to have stuff in common with your partner (girlfriend or boyfriend). Therefore, I'm sure that if you do stuff together, you will be get better and will be very happy .

    P.S.: I'm sorry for my English level, I know that I need to improve but I'm in progress. I appreciate your efforts to correct me.

    wow great article you can write your thoughts/emotions very accurate.

    i would give this article 80/100


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    September 17, 2017
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