How did I meet you?
Today, Im gonna write about my girlfriend because we already are together 2 years and 6 months. I knew her when I was 22 years old on 17th March in 2015. She was in a party in Valencia's city center and I went there because I gonna listan a music group. She was with her fiends and I knew one of them so our friend introduces us. I was talking to her for many hours, more and less from 12pm until 4am. The night was perfect, we had fun and decided to meet up another day to talk more and know each other. That day was one of the most important days in my life since I knew the best person that I have ever known.
From that day, we started a relationship and now we still are together and very happy. We have fun every day that we are together and we have a lot of stuff in common. We go jogging many days, go skating and more... Currently, she is studying to become Spanish teacher and she helps foreign people to learn Spanish every Saturday. She wishes to finish her studies in order to open her own Spanish academy. The truth is that I'm proud of her!
Regarding our relationship, as I have told before we are very happy together and I love her. I fell in love when I knew her. In addition, we think in our future every day and we expect to rent a flat soon because we are still living in our parents' home and we need more privacy. We have many plans for the future as you can see and our life cannot be better. Because of I'm software developer, we can mix both of our studies to do something brilliant and useful for learners and specially for children. Our sooner goal is to think about a new mobile application that helps young people to find interesting things when they try to learn a new language. It's important that children don't find boring learning. As we know many of problems that a children can find learning a new language, we think that our knowledge can be useful for them and to do the life easier than ever.
In this text, I have tried to explain you that it is quite important to have stuff in common with your partner (girlfriend or boyfriend). Therefore, I'm sure that if you do stuff together, you will be better and will be very happy.
P.S.: I'm sorry for my English level, I know that I need to improve but I'm in progress. I appreciate your efforts to correct me.
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How did I meet you?
Today, Im gonna write about my girlfriend because we already are together for 2 years and 6 months. I knew met her when I was 22 years old on 17th March in 2015. She was in at a party in Valencia's city center and I went there because I gonna listan wanted to see a music group. She was with her friends and I knew one of them so our friend introduces introduced us. I was talking to her for many hours, more and less from 12pm until 4am. The night was perfect, we had fun and decided to meet up another day to talk more and get to know each other. That day was one of the most important days in my life since I knew the best person that I have ever known.From that day, we started a relationship and are living happily together and now we still are together and very happy. We have fun every day that we are together and we have a lot of stuff in common. We go do jogging many days, go skating and more... Currently, she is studying to become Spanish teacher and she helps foreign people to learn Spanish every Saturday. She wishes to finish her studies in order to open her own Spanish academy. The truth is that I'm proud of her!
Regarding our relationship, as I have told before we are very happy together and I love her. I fell in love when I knew her. In addition, we think in about our future every day and we expect to rent a flat soon because we are still living in with our parents' home and we need ("want" is possible here) more privacy. We have many plans for the future as you can see and our life cannot be better. Because of I'm i am a software developer, we can mix both of our studies to do something brilliant and useful for learners and specially for children. Our sooner immediate goal is to think about a new mobile application that helps young people to find interesting things when they try to learn learning a new language. It's important that children don't find boring learning learning boring. As we know many of problems that a children can find have learning a new language, we think that our knowledge can be useful for them and to do the make life ("learning" is possible here) easier than ever.
In this text, I have tried to explain you that it is quite important to have stuff in common with your partner (girlfriend or boyfriend). Therefore, I'm sure that if you do stuff together, you will be get better and will be very happy .
P.S.: I'm sorry for my English level, I know that I need to improve but I'm in progress. I appreciate your efforts to correct me.
wow great article you can write your thoughts/emotions very accurate.
i would give this article 80/100
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