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    Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Many many thanks in advance

    The pie charts show the structures of those who are British students studying at one college and speak other languages apart from English in 2000 and 2010

    Students are divided into 6 groups: No other language, French only, German only, Spanish only, Another language and Two other languages. Although there existed some differences, most of students learned Spanish only in both 2000 and 2010 while least of them decided to choose German as their second language.

    Except for German only which had 10% students learning, all others had some changes 10 years later . No other language had a predominant decrease, from 20% to 10%. In contrast, Another language and Two other languages both had an obvious improvement of 5%. Maybe it was because that with global development, it became more necessary to master another language. But still Another language had more 5% students than Two other languages. They were at 20% and 15% in 2010, respectively. Besides, There are more 5% students chose to learn Spanish as their second language as well, from 30% to 35%. At the same time, French only dropped to 10% from 15%.

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    June 20, 2017
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    Thank you for your corrections. Thank you so much.

    Topic:
    Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
    To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
    Content:
    There is no doubt that it is necessary for people to recycle which is environmentally friendly and has a positive effect on saving resource. But except making laws by governments, there are also some other ways of doing it.

    Making a laws by governments can works because most of people do not want to breakobey laws, otherwise they will suffer sanctions. However, there are some shortcomings. First, legislative branch have to think comprehensively about the contents of laws and make sure it is suitable to apply. It requires people to survey which costs time and money. Second, judicial department should take the responsibilities of supervising the laws. Besides, it will take time for people to accept and get used to the laws. What’s more, as recycling being costly, people have to pay much money on its facilities which burdens the family’s economy. Above all, from time-efficient and money-saved perspective, it is not the best way to sort out people’s thoughts of recycling and boost recycling.

    There are some other options which are more suitable to improve recycling. Firstly companies are willing to develop new techniques of recycling if there are some mileages. So it will be useful if governments encourage them via economy. Secondly, we should realize that it is people’s thoughts of recycling that works not laws. So it would be better to advertise recycling in pubic and let it deep into people’s minds. Also it is necessary to teach people how to recycle. Only if they know how to separate reusable things from real rubbishes, they can make use of them. What’s more, economic benefits can prompt more people to buy recycling facilities which helps people to reuse their waste.

    To sum, recycling becomes more and more important in our daily life because of the scarcity of resource. Making laws by governments can prompt people to recycle but it is not the only way to do it.
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    June 20, 2017
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