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Thank you for your corrections. Thank you so much. Topic: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste. Content: There is no doubt that it is necessary for people to recycle which is environmentally friendly and has a positive effect on saving resource. But except making lows by governments, there are also some other ways of doing it. Making a lows by governments can works because most of people do not want to obey laws., otherwise they will suffer sanctions. However, there are some shortcomings. First, legislative branch have to think comprehensively about the contents of laws and make sure it is suitable to apply. It requires people to survey which costs time and money. Second, judicial department should take the responsibilities of supervising the laws. Besides, it will take time for people to accept and get used to the laws. What’s more, as recycling being costly, people have to pay much money on its facilities which burdens the family’s economy. Above all, from time-efficient and money-saved perspective, it is not the best way to sort out people’s thoughts of recycling and boost recycling. There are some other options which are more suitable to improve recycling. Firstly companies are willing to develop new techniques of recycling if there are some mileages. So it will be useful if governments encourage them via economy. Secondly, we should realize that it is people’s thoughts of recycling that works not laws. So it would be better to advertise recycling in pubic and let it deep into people’s minds. Also it is necessary to teach people how to recycle. Only if they know how to separate reusable things from real rubbishes, they can make use of them. What’s more, economic benefits can prompt more people to buy recycling facilities which helps people to reuse their waste. To sum, recycling becomes more and more important in our daily life because of the scarcity of resource. Making laws by governments can prompt people to recycle but it is not the only way to do it.

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Thank you for your corrections. Thank you so much.

Topic:
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Content:
There is no doubt that it is necessary for people to recycle, which is environmentally friendly and has a positive effect on conserving resources. But apart from governments making laws , there are also some other ways of doing it. 

The making of laws by governments can work because most people do not want to disobey laws, for fear of facing punishment. However, there are some shortcomings. First, legislative branches have to think comprehensively about the contents of laws and make sure they are suitable. This requires people to conduct surveys, which takes time and costs money. Second, judicial departments should take responsibility for supervising these laws. Besides, it takes time for people to accept and get used to new laws. What’s more, as recycling is costly, people have to spend a lot of money on recycling facilities, which burdens the family’s economy (country's economy?). Above all, from the perspective of efficient use of time and saving money, formulating new laws is not the best way to sort out people’s thoughts on recycling, or to boost (increase the amount of?) recycling.

There are some other more suitable options for encouraging people to recycle. Firstly, companies are willing to develop new recycling techniques if there are some advantages. Therefore, it would be useful if governments encouraged them via economy (第二类条件). Secondly, we should realize that it is people’s thoughts about recycling that work, rather than laws. So it would be better to advertise recycling in public and to let it penetrate into people’s minds. Also it is necessary to teach people how to recycle. People can only make use of reusable things if they know how to separate them from real rubbish. What’s more, economic benefits can prompt more people to buy recycling facilities which helps people to reuse their waste.


To summarise, recycling is becoming (过程就是正在进行的) more and more important in our daily lives because of the scarcity of resources. The making of laws by governments can prompt people to recycle but it is not the only way to do it.

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Thank you for your corrections. Thank you so much.

Topic:
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
Content:
There is no doubt that it is necessary for people to recycle which is environmentally friendly and has a positive effect on saving resource. But except making laws by governments, there are also some other ways of doing it.

Making a laws by governments can works because most of people do not want to breakobey laws, otherwise they will suffer sanctions. However, there are some shortcomings. First, legislative branch have to think comprehensively about the contents of laws and make sure it is suitable to apply. It requires people to survey which costs time and money. Second, judicial department should take the responsibilities of supervising the laws. Besides, it will take time for people to accept and get used to the laws. What’s more, as recycling being costly, people have to pay much money on its facilities which burdens the family’s economy. Above all, from time-efficient and money-saved perspective, it is not the best way to sort out people’s thoughts of recycling and boost recycling.

There are some other options which are more suitable to improve recycling. Firstly companies are willing to develop new techniques of recycling if there are some mileages. So it will be useful if governments encourage them via economy. Secondly, we should realize that it is people’s thoughts of recycling that works not laws. So it would be better to advertise recycling in pubic and let it deep into people’s minds. Also it is necessary to teach people how to recycle. Only if they know how to separate reusable things from real rubbishes, they can make use of them. What’s more, economic benefits can prompt more people to buy recycling facilities which helps people to reuse their waste.

To sum, recycling becomes more and more important in our daily life because of the scarcity of resource. Making laws by governments can prompt people to recycle but it is not the only way to do it.

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