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    Icy Summer


    We waited 9 months for summer. We wanted to swim in rivers, walk every day,  and get energy from the sun. We wanted warmth. Now we have rains, cold, and melancholy. We even went to southern Russia two weeks ago, but there it was cold too! In the middle of May in Moscow it was snowing. Maybe foreigners think that it is OK for Russia, but it is not OK. In central Russia winters are usually icy and summers hot. Where is global warming?))

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    A few sentences. Are there any mistakes?

    It's difficult to know how we've become who we are now.
    Thinking about it makes us conscious that the role of peril is very important.

    It's easy to find many decisions, and some of them very important, that have completely changed the course of life.
    Sometimes it was not a decision, but just a hazardous event that changed this course.


    (Your English is very good, well done. My corrections are minor and I would be happy to explain them.)

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