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It's difficult to know how we've become who we are now.
Thinking about it makes us conscious that the part of hazard is very important.
It's easy to find many decisions, and some of them very important, that changed completely the course of the life.
Sometimes, it was not decision, but just an hazard event that changed this course.
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It's difficult to know/understand how we've become who we are now.Thinking about it makes us conscious that the [part of hazard]/role of chance is very important. OR chance plays an important part
It's easy to [find]/think of many decisions, and some of them very important, that have changed completely OR completely changed the course of the our lives/[life].
Sometimes, it was not a decision, but just an chance/random hazard event that changed this course.
Yes, it's a sobering thought that our lives are so susceptible to Fate.
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A few sentences. Are there any mistakes?
It's difficult to know how we've become who we are now.Thinking about it makes us conscious that the role of peril is very important.
It's easy to find many decisions, and some of them very important, that have completely changed the course of life.
Sometimes it was not a decision, but just a hazardous event that changed this course.
(Your English is very good, well done. My corrections are minor and I would be happy to explain them.)
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