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    纯素者 Another Day Vegan

    Another day vegan, still haven't died of nutrient deficiency.
    1)再活多一天纯素的生活，还没有死于营养不良


    2)又过了一天纯素的生活，还没有死于营养不良

    Both of them are correct grammtically, but they are kind of weird for Chinese.

    correction: 又吃了一整天的素，我还是没有死于营养不良。


    Real food has mud not blood.
    1)真正的食物是（从土里长出来的）种在土壤里而不是从动物溢出的血液<<
    (Real food comes from the earth, not the spilled blood of animals)

    correction：蔬菜延寿，荤菜减寿。


    帮我写地道点，谢谢！

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    reading, jogging, studying........keep doing something and you will feel truly alive.
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