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纯素者 Another Day Vegan Another day vegan, still haven't died of nutrient deficiency. 1)再活多一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良 2)又过了一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良 Real food has mud not blood. 1)真正的食物是(从土里长出来的)种在土壤里而不是从动物溢出的血液<< (Real food comes from the earth, not the spilled blood of animals) 帮我写地道点,谢谢!

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纯素者 Another Day Vegan

Another day vegan, still haven't died of nutrient deficiency.
1)再活多一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良

2)又过了一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良

Real food has mud not blood.
1)真正的食物是(从土里长出来的)种在土壤里而不是从动物溢出的血液<<
(Real food comes from the earth, not the spilled blood of animals)

帮我写地道点,谢谢!


纯素新一天,仍还没有死于营养不良。

真正的食物来自土壤而非血液。

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纯素者 Another Day Vegan

Another day as a vegan, and I still haven't died of nutrient deficiency.
1)再活又过了多一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良死亡。

2)又过了一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良

Real food has mud, not blood.
1)真正的食物是从土里长出来的,种在土壤里而不是从动物溢出的血液。
(Real food comes from the earth, not the spilled blood of animals)

帮我写地道点,谢谢!

Here you go, 高欣妮 =)

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纯素者 Another Day Vegan

Another day vegan, still haven't died of nutrient deficiency.
1)再活多一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良

2)又过了一天纯素的生活,我还没有死于营养不良  

Real food has mud not blood.
1)真正的食物是(从土里长出来的)种在土壤里的而不是从动物溢出的血液动物身上溢出的血<<
(Real food comes from the earth, not the spilled blood of animals)

帮我写地道点,谢谢!
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纯素者 Another Day Vegan

Another day vegan, still haven't died of nutrient deficiency.
1)再活多一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良


2)又过了一天纯素的生活,还没有死于营养不良

Both of them are correct grammtically, but they are kind of weird for Chinese.

correction: 又吃了一整天的素,我还是没有死于营养不良。


Real food has mud not blood.
1)真正的食物是(从土里长出来的)种在土壤里而不是从动物溢出的血液<<
(Real food comes from the earth, not the spilled blood of animals)

correction:蔬菜延寿,荤菜减寿。


帮我写地道点,谢谢!

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纯素并非营养不良,我也喜欢吃素菜。

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