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    A part of essay

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    (The theme: Today young people think only about making money and career.)

    It is really difficult choice , work where you want, enjoy it and just earn living or find the boring work and waste you dull days there, but have a perfect conditions in life. Everyone decide what they want to be - what is better for them. For me, I agree with this statement.

    All people want to have a life, full of prosperity and luxuries. It is natural desire of everyone. So many of them are ready for any work in order to be rich. First of all, I am strongly convinced that young people at the age of 18-28 must care about their future. They need to create conditions for starting a family in the future. Moreover, most of people nowadays tend to trying to choose the best school or university in order to get decent and well-paid job. Society is ready for developing according to modern demanding.
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    June 11, 2017
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