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(The theme: Today young people think only about making money and career.)
It is really difficult choice - work where you want, enjoy it and just earn living or find the boring work and waste you dull days there, but have an perfect conditions in life. Everyone decide yourself - what is better for him. As for me, I agree with this statement.
All people want to have life, full of prosperity and luxuries. It is natural desire of everyone. So many of them are ready for any work in order to be rich. First of all, I am strongly convinced that young people at the age og 18-28 must care about their future. They need to create conditions for starting a family in the future. Moreover, most of people nowadays tend to trying to choose the best school or university in order to get decent and well-paid job. Society is ready for developing according to modern demanding.
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A part of essay
Please, help me! Correct it !:)(The theme: Today young people think only about making money and career.)
It is really difficult choice , work where you want, enjoy it and just earn living or find the boring work and waste you dull days there, but have a perfect conditions in life. Everyone decide what they want to be - what is better for them. For me, I agree with this statement.
All people want to have a life, full of prosperity and luxuries. It is natural desire of everyone. So many of them are ready for any work in order to be rich. First of all, I am strongly convinced that young people at the age of 18-28 must care about their future. They need to create conditions for starting a family in the future. Moreover, most of people nowadays tend to trying to choose the best school or university in order to get decent and well-paid job. Society is ready for developing according to modern demanding.
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