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    The most nervous experience

    You can have a good command of foreign languages only if you use it.
    I was one of an oversea student in Korea.
    I raised would raise my hand and speak during my class activity activities without hesitation. Of course, I felt irritated because sometimes I could not sometimes make myself understood, however, thanks to speaking actively, my korean was going to be improved. My doctor got surprised with by me because his image for Japanese is being shy and passive.
    But, there were some times that I got nervous. It is the experience that I had never done even in Japan. That is not the issue involved with languages.
    For example, I had never been to the a hair salon in Japan. I always go to barbershops.
    I do not care about my hairstyle and I just want to keep my hair short and clean. So, I did not go to the hair salon.
    I did not know what kind of place a hair salon is. I entered the hair salon in Korea while thinking ' Might a man enter here?' and ' What should I do if it is very expensive?'.
    I think this experience is was the most nervous than all of it in out of all of them Korea. For practice to speak Korean, I should have tried a difficult order to at the hair dresser at that time, but because I was warried worried about speaking properly, I just said ' Could you cut my hair shortly?'
    I have gotten used to that now.
    We should have many a lot of experience before we go abroad.
    What is your nervous experience? Please let me know.
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    June 13, 2017
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    Mi Escuela Hola. Voy a escribir sobre mi escuela. Mi escuela está en la ciudad. Cuando necesito ir a la escuela, yo despierto a las seis en la mañana. En mi escuela, yo escribo mucho y siempre trato en mis clases. Tambien, me gusta hablar con mis amigos. Yo saco buenas notas porque yo trabajo mucho. En el verano, no tengo escuela.
    June 9, 2017
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    Finding a place to live

    Finding a place to live is one of the first things that you need to do when you come to a new country. To find a home, you must decide how much space you need, how much you can pay and the part of town you want to live in. Homes are usually described by the number of bedrooms. Most have two, three etc. Most homes also have a living room, a kitchen, one or more bathrooms, and maybe a dining room. How many bedrooms you're going to need depends on how many people are in your household.


    Very good entry, the grammar and vocabulary you used was excellent. I only have a few suggestions. When talking about one object, like a living room, you need an article before it, usually "a" or "an". When more is used as an adjective, the following noun is usually plural. When making a list with commas, the word "and" is inserted in the last "section." Finally, the number of bedrooms will be considered the third person singular form, so add an "s" to the end of the verb, depend. I hope my feedback helped and everything was clear, I enjoyed looking at your writing.

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    June 9, 2017
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