Finding a place to live
Finding a place to live is one of the first things that you need to do when you come to a new country. To find a home, you must decide how much space you need, how much you can pay and the part of town you want to live in. Homes are usually described by the number of bedrooms. Most have two, three etc. Most homes also have living room, a kitchen, one or more bathroom, maybe a dining room. How many bedrooms you're going to need depend on how many people are in your household.
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Finding a place to live
Finding a place to live is one of the first things that you need to do when you come to a new country. To find a home, you must decide how much space you need, how much you can pay and the part of town you want to live in. Homes are usually described by the number of bedrooms. Most have two, three etc. Most homes also have a living room, a kitchen, one or more bathrooms, and maybe a dining room. How many bedrooms you're going to need depends on how many people are in your household.Very good entry, the grammar and vocabulary you used was excellent. I only have a few suggestions. When talking about one object, like a living room, you need an article before it, usually "a" or "an". When more is used as an adjective, the following noun is usually plural. When making a list with commas, the word "and" is inserted in the last "section." Finally, the number of bedrooms will be considered the third person singular form, so add an "s" to the end of the verb, depend. I hope my feedback helped and everything was clear, I enjoyed looking at your writing.
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