please help me correction my letter to scholership
I am abanoub raafat aziz from Alexandria ,Egypt . I want tell you about my life experiences in works. when I was child I go every holiday with my dad to work in garage to maintenance buses and repair it with different people (in thinking and behavior , ) and I can handling every thing with them . I just want to say from the short story I am responsible person and I know my weaknesses points and work on it to improve myself and also I know my strongpoints like(creative, leadership , imagination, social, passion) ,thanks a lot
I only want comment one thing I know my English not good enough but I try to improve it, I am waiting to chance to know more about entrepreneur
please tell me what is the reason if I don't get this chance