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please help me correction my letter to scholership I am abanoub raafat aziz from Alexandria ,Egypt . I want tell you about my life experiences in works. when I was child I go every holiday with my dad to work in garage to maintenance buses and repair it with different people (in thinking and behavior , ) and I can handling every thing with them . I just want to say from the short story I am responsible person and I know my weaknesses points and work on it to improve myself and also I know my strongpoints like(creative, leadership , imagination, social, passion) ,thanks a lot I only want comment one thing I know my English not good enough but I try to improve it, I am waiting to chance to know more about entrepreneur please tell me what is the reason if I don't get this chance

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Please help me correct my scholarship letter.

I am abanoub raafat aziz from Alexandria, Egypt . I want tell you about my life experiences in works. When I was child I go went on every holiday with my dad. We worked  to work in a garage to doing maintenance work on buses and repairing them  it   with different people (in thinking and behavior , ). and I can handle everything with them . I just want to say from the this short story that I am a responsible person and I know my weaknesses points and am working on improving myself.  Also,  I know my strong points (creative, leadership , imagination, social, passion for example). ,thanks a lot
I only want to comment on one thing; I know my English is not good enough but I will try to improve it, I am waiting for a to chance to know more about entrepreneurship.

Please tell me what the reason is if I don't get this chance.

Try: I would be grateful for this opportunity and look forward to hearing from you.

Excellent work !

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I am Abanoub Raafat Aziz from Alexandria, Egypt . I want to tell you about my working experience. When I was a child I went every holiday with my Dad to work to the bus garage and repaired them with different people (in thinking and behavior) and I could repair anything. I just want to say from this short story that I am a responsible person and I know my weaknesses points and work on them to improve myself and also I know my strongpoints like (creativity, leadership, imagination, social skills, and passion), thanks a lot.

I only want to mention one thing, I know my English is not good enough but I'm trying to improve it, I am waiting for a chance to know more about entrepreneurship. Please tell me what is the reason if I don't get this chance, thank you.

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