I went to “KAIKE ONSEN” in Tottori prefecture with my family. I found that most people were <strike>seeing</strike> looking at their smartphonesand walking while we were out for a stroll. There was a <strike>event of </strike>Pokémon GO event. I ate a dinner <strike>of</strike> that hadcrabs. It was so delicious!
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February 26, 2018
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AsI'm involved with many types of people, my knowledge and way of thinking will expand.On top of that, I will experience bad and good things <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">will be my experience</strike> in life.
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February 25, 2018
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AsI'm involved with many types of people, my knowledge and way of thinking will expand.On top of that, I will experience bad and good things <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">will be my experience</strike> in life.