Please correct my diary of 24 FEB 2018 I went to “KAIKE ONSEN” in Tottori prefecture with my family. I found that most people were seeing their smartphone and walking while we were out for a stroll. T

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Please correct my diary of 24 FEB 2018 I went to “KAIKE ONSEN” in Tottori prefecture with my family. I found that most people were seeing their smartphone and walking while we were out for a stroll. There was a event of Pokémon GO. I ate a dinner of crabs. It was so delicious!

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Please correct my diary of 24 FEB 2018

I went to “KAIKE ONSEN” in Tottori prefecture with my family. Most people were looking at their smartphone and walking while we were out for a stroll. There was a Pokémon GO event. I ate crab for dinner. It was so delicious!

I went to “KAIKE ONSEN” in Tottori prefecture with my family. I found that most people were ~~seeing~~ looking at their smartphones and walking while we were out for a stroll. There was a ~~event of~~ Pokémon GO event. I ate a dinner of that had crabs. It was so delicious!

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