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My name is Jordan Rae, and i am very interested in expanding my knowledge of the Spanish language and culture. Over the past year of taking Spanish courses I have began to absolutely love the language and have taken a true liking to learning it. I am very open and willing to suggestions and corrections. I am open to helping people with English in any way I can! Feel free to contact me with any questions about English writing! I will answer as quickly as I can!
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    Exams

    Hi everyone! This year I'm graduating . I'm leaving school and I must pass four exams. Math, my nature language (Russian) , Biology and Social Studies. The last two I have left are math and russian language. Exams in Russia are called OGE or BSE (basic state examenation). I so scared for the results. I have already completed Biology and Social Studies, but I don't think I did well because the questions were very hard and complexed. My high school graduation will be July 1st. I hope that everything will be alright:)
    Rita, xoxo<3
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    June 2, 2017
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    What weird weather!

    Since the weather is so unpredictable, I am always wondering what it will be  the next day. ( I reworded this sentence to allow it to flow easier) When I go to work in the mornings there is a dazzling and warm light radiating from the ( i used more complexed words to add detail to the writing) sun everywhere. The grass is green, birds are singing, and butterflies are flying. Two hours later,  you can see a totally different picture - dark clouds, heavy wind and rain... (deleted "and" because it is not the proper way to start a sentence) Finally when I come home from work in the evening it is so cold that my skin is covered in goosebumps, tmy teeth are chattering and I think that snow will come soon.
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    June 1, 2017
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    Singing with the soul

    I always dreamed of working with music, but I never really committed. I'm a lazy person with some talent. (deleted the "and" because it is not the proper way to start a sentence) The talent disrupted me a little, because it made me think I didn't have to fight for it. Things always came on in an easy way.
    But now, I realize that I need to run after the time I've lost. There are so many things to learn and improve. I just want to (changing this can maintain the formal appearance of the writing)  be the best singer and actress I can be.

    Thank you for reading and correcting!
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    June 1, 2017
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    diary

    Today I went shoping with my daughters, Kiko and Momo,  and we went to the supermarket.
    I pushed Momo to the supermarket in a stroller. 
    Kiko went to the supermarket riding a tricycle. 
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    June 1, 2017
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