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    FOOD

    I usually like to buy some food at the market. For example, some vegetables,  chicken, some fruits, a half dozen of eggs, some potatoes, meat, some tomatoes and some carrots. However, when I want to buy some water, some milk, some pasta and some yogurts, I prefer buying it at a supermarket, because I can choose from a lot more varieties. 

    Yet, when I wanna buy some bread, I prefer buying it at the bakery,  because there is a lot of varieties from  which I can choose, and sometimes, their bread is handmade, while the ones in the supermarkets are industrial.


    I made some changes. 

    1. Everytime you say 2 verbs in a sentence, the second one will be in the infinitive form. Because of that, you need to use the TO before it.

    2. Whenever you're going to buy meat, you'll buy it by pounds. So, it sounds weird to say SOME meat and SOME chicken. Other things such as yogurts, we can buy by unit, so it is okay to say SOME yogurts.

    3. A BIG supermarket is not necessary. A Market is smaller, so a SUPERmarket will already be bigger.

    4. When you are at a specific place, with adress and all, you can't say you are IN it. We say we are AT it. We use in for other things, for example, I'm in the shower, I'm in trouble...



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    May 19, 2017
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    I think it would sound more natural if you said IT'S instead of IT IS. And if by HOME you mean a HOUSE, then change it for HOUSE. HOUSE is a physical thing, while HOME is more of just an ideia, an ideia of something that makes you feel comfortable and familiar to something.
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