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I usually like buy some food in the market for example, some vegetable, some chicken, some fruits, a half douze egg, some potatoes, some meat, some tomatoes and some carrot but when I would like to buy some water, some milk , some pasta and some yogurts I prefer buy it in a big supermarket because I can choose more and there are a lot of variety of it
However, when I buy some bread I prefer buy it in the bakery because, there is a lot of kind of variety of it for choose there and sometimes, the bread sticks are more artisans than in the supermarket.
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I usually like to buy some food at the market. For example, some vegetables, chicken, some fruits, a half dozen of eggs, some potatoes, meat, some tomatoes and some carrots. However, when I want to buy some water, some milk, some pasta and some yogurts, I prefer buying it at a supermarket, because I can choose from a lot more varieties.Yet, when I wanna buy some bread, I prefer buying it at the bakery, because there is a lot of varieties from which I can choose, and sometimes, their bread is handmade, while the ones in the supermarkets are industrial.
I made some changes.
1. Everytime you say 2 verbs in a sentence, the second one will be in the infinitive form. Because of that, you need to use the TO before it.
2. Whenever you're going to buy meat, you'll buy it by pounds. So, it sounds weird to say SOME meat and SOME chicken. Other things such as yogurts, we can buy by unit, so it is okay to say SOME yogurts.
3. A BIG supermarket is not necessary. A Market is smaller, so a SUPERmarket will already be bigger.
4. When you are at a specific place, with adress and all, you can't say you are IN it. We say we are AT it. We use in for other things, for example, I'm in the shower, I'm in trouble...
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FOODS
I usually like to buy some food in the market. For example, some vegetables, some chicken, some fruits, a half douzen eggs, some potatoes, some meat, some tomatoes and some carrot. But when I would like to buy some water, some milk, some pasta and some yogurts I prefer to buy it in a big supermarket because I can choose more and there are is a lot of variety of itHowever, when I buy some bread I prefer buy it in the bakery because, there is a lot of kinds of variety of it for to choose there and sometimes, the breadsticks are more artisans than in the supermarket.
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