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- I need to correct this text please!!!! I would like to talk about health issues focusing on mainstream or conventional medicine and alternative medicine or more precisely, alternative treatments. I chose this topic because...I was stunned to discover that according several studies, conventional medicine is the leading cause of death today! People return to the conventional medicine over and over again, feeling like they have no choice. Nevertheless there is another option. Moreover, some people may say that the pharmaceutical industry cannot be that bad. But the pharmaceutical industry is not a ‘health industry’, but an ‘investment business’. So, it is clear that health care has improved a great deal for ordinary people who live in societies where there is a public health care system. So It's important to point out that this means we have improved our living standards and also our life expectancy. When we speak of mainstream medicine today we are referring TO different kinds of things, because our concept of health and our resources TO take care OF ourselves varies. In any case, generally speaking, despite mainstream medicine is about taking drugs prescribed BY doctors TO address different kinds of health problems, nowadays we have also started to include natural medicine resources, for instance...herbal medicine and homeopathy, and alternative treatments, mostly related TO our joints and muscles, including physiotherapy, osteopathy and chiropractics. The point is that people are starting to question if we should include in our public health care system acupuncture from Chinese medicine, or yoga from Hindu philosophy? So far, we all agree these resources can be called alternative treatments. Besides this, another point, of discussion is about whether these complementary or alternative treatments should be covered by the public health care system or not. Obviously, the lack of coverage is a barrier for the people, particularly low-income families, in accessing treatment from alternative practitioners. Moreover, sometimes people pay both:to support the health care system and to choose alternative health care. To sum up, as far as I'm concerned, although many of the treatments are not supported by scientific evidence, they are in demand...so ..Every country has to decide whether it wants to maintain a conventional healthcare system or whether it wants to develop a new healthcare system based on effective and natural health.May 18, 201720
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Las redes sociales tienen muchas ventajas y desventajas. Por un lado, es muy útil para charlar con amigos, particularmente aquellos que viven en otro país, porque es gratis. Además, es una manera para compartir tus ideas y pensamientos. Por ejemplo, la aplicación ‘Instagram’ permite a los usuarios compartir fotos y exponer su creatividad. Hace unos pocos años, cuando usé por primera vez ‘Instagram’, descubrí que tenía pasión por la fotografía. Supongo que otra gente siente lo mismo. También, puedes encontrar inspiración en otros usuarios.
Pero, por otro lado, puede ser peligroso, especialmente para los jóvenes. Hay gente falsa que hablan contigo y descubren información importante. Afecta más a los jóvenes, porque ignoran a los adultos cuando dicen “no habléis con desconocidos”. Los usuarios no deben compartir sus datos personales.Además de esto, las redes sociales pueden ser adictivas, y pueden acaparar mucho tiempo. La gente pasa demasiado tiempo inmersa en Internet. Supongo que las personas disfrutan menos de la vida, una consecuencia directa de las redes sociales.
En general, las redes sociales pueden ser divertidas y útiles, es evidente que las redes sociales serán muy importantes en el futuro. Pero, las desventajas no deben ser olvidadas.0 votedMay 18, 20170

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