在中国的腐败 - Part 3

中文：
官方称(官员 means someone who is in a position of authority in an organization, 官方approved by the government or by someone in authority)，一部(a fixed quantifier matches 电视剧(tv series)新的关于（many verbs in English can be transferred into propositions when it is translated into Chinese）腐败中国官员的电视剧已经有(Chinese does not focus much on its tense) 佳评如潮。十多名被人唾弃的官员将会出现在《永远在路上》(actually this series does have a Chinese name and please pay more attention to the punctuations)这部关于政府大范围打击腐败的8集电视连续剧 。第一个集讲述了一个哭泣并悔过的男人以及(而且 means moreover in English)对金龟的有争议的葬礼(here burial simply means 葬礼, it does not involve the way how the body is buried)。自周一上映（here in Chinese we use 上映 to describe the air of episodes or movies）以来它已经拥有了一百多万的观众。CCDI声称（this word can be directly used as a verb）“全国都讨论‘Always on the Road'"。 CCDI(中纪委)调查(investigate means 调查. the word 检查 is more likely to express the word ' check' )贪污腐败(these two words are often used together in Chinese),并且跟中国中央电视台一起摄制了这部电视剧(it would be better if the sentence is complemented)。这个纪录片上映于习近平主席承诺严厉打击其党内的腐败而且打击“老虎”和“苍蝇”(here tigers and flies have specific meanings. It comes from President Xi's speeches and referred to those corrupted officials both in high levels of the authority in the government and low levels. To express the ironic meaning, a quotation mark is a must )近四年以后。
不过批评家认为清洗行动缺乏透明度。这意味着它也是习主席清除政府内异己的一个机会。
三个控诉受贿和滥用职权的所谓的“老虎”在纪录片的第一集都出现了： 受终身监禁的原市委书记周本顺， 正在等审判的前党内高层周本顺，被判处13年有期徒刑的原党委副书记李春城
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周本顺的故事不只是简单的腐败。纪录片中他把乌龟和宗教卷轴一起埋入土中，虽然这样的行为也是违背党规的。(it is not a real low of China. The law here is more like a discipline for members of Communist Party, which do not allow its members to  go after religions. Communists are all atheists)

Generally speaking, you did a good job in the passage translation except some usage of words and organization of sentences. Besides, I think it would be much better if you can search for some details of the background knowledge so that you can have some knowledge about specific words like 'Tigers' or something like that. 

*I don't know whether I expressed my opinions clearly enough. If you have any questions you could contact me further to discuss about them.