The Initial Dream

Sleeping too much can make many people who just wake up like ( ... ) with the passage of time and space and keep asking themselves, who I am, where I am and why I am here. So on the way to chase our dreams, do you often sleep too much and forget yourself?

What do you want from your life?...

We have the only one life. Our life The life every of us has its beggining a beginning and its end. And after the end, nobody will give you one minute more. It is not a draft. It is not a computer game where you can save and backup all your achievements. (Tthe life ) This is not a demo version.
You can not to make your life longer (You won't expand your life), try it again or stop it for a while. The life will finish in a day whether you want it or not. You can just make it short or keep its original length.
Your life is material from which you can sculpt something beautiful or bad. This is a kind of substance from what his/her owner can create everything that he/she wants.
My (quiestion question is: Does the owner know what he wants from his/her life and does the owner know what he/she wants at all.

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Good try .. Hope that helps!

Good luck!

1) The most crucial problem is the money payment 2) The payment of money is the most crucial problem

Also, you can say it briefly : كثير من الناس ياتون الى القاهرة خصوصا من سكان الريف A lot of people come to Cairo, especially from rural areas

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A light

Recently, a light was installed in front of my room.
It's very bright!
I am happy, but it is too bright.
Recently, It is warm.
So, many bugs are active.
They are gathering( They have gathered) in a bright spot.
And, They were gathered at my room's door.
I am afraid of for the bugs to make an invasion upon into my room.