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Hello, I am Wee, from Singapore. I want to learn Thai and Japanese. I studied in Australia. English is my native language. I can speak some Mandarin Chinese [中文]. Let us learn together! สวัสดีครับ. ผมชื่อ-วี-กจากสิงคโปร์. ยากเรียนภาษาไทย. ผมศึกษาที่ออสเตรเลีย. ภาษาอังกฤษเป็นภาษาผม. พูดภาษาจีนได้. もしもし. 私はウィーです.シンガポール人です. はじめまして. オーストラリアで勉強したから, 英語のレベルはネイティブスピーカーです. 中国語話しこともできる. よろしくお願いします!
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    Is it better to love and lose, or never to love?

    When people are falling in love, their hearts are filled with refreshment. On the contrary, should their love be broken, their hearts will be numbed. In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of the last time when I fell in love. However, as far as I am concerned, both to love and lose and never to love are so unavoidably anguished, bitter and droopy that I cannot choose which one is better. Eventually, it is not the word “LOVE” that they say to their loved ones before being broken completely into pieces.

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    Is it better to love and lose, or never to love?

    When people are falling in love, their hearts  is are fulfilled by with refreshment. On the contrary, should their love be broken, only their hearts will be numbed. To In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of the last time when I fell in love. However, as far as I am concerned, both to love and lose, and never to love are so unavoidably anguished, bitter and droopy unavoidably that I cannot choose which one is better. Eventually, it was is not word “LOVE” that they always said  say with to their beloved ones before damaging one piecemeal among remains of sorrow.  being broken completely into pieces.

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    Is it better loving and losing, or never to love?

    When people fall in love, their hearts are filled with joy. However, when they fall out of love, their hearts will be numb. In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of the last time when I fell in love. As far as I am concerned, loving and losing, and never to love are both similarly full of anguish, bitterness and pain that I cannot choose which one is better. In the end, it is not the word 'love' that is whispered in the ears of their loved ones when the relationship is being broken completely into pieces.

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    May 3, 2017
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    Sometimes, little things will cause my mind to conjure up assumptions (胡思乱想), I and get angry at you. It's not because I have changed, but it's because I found myself caring for you more and more. I care for you, therefore I get mad. If I didn't care for you, I wouldn't even bother.

    I think this is the meaning. I tried word for word translation, but it didn't come across right. 

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    I like the starry sky.

    I’m sure everybody is interested in the starry sky. I am fascinated by it too!
    Orion is one of the most recognizable constellations. Once you found Orion, you can take it as a sign to look for the nearby Sirius which is the brightest star in the night sky. The seven stars that look like a pan make up the famous "Big Dipper". Identify the position of the “Big Dipper”, and you can find Ursa Minor and Polaris.
    I like reading science books very much. Through reading, I know about the "Milky Way system", "solar system", "nebula", "cluster", "Star", "planet", "Venus", "Jupiter", "Mercury", “Mars", "meteor shower" and so on. I will continue to use my telescope to watch the sky, maybe one day, I will find a new planet named after my name, who knows?
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    May 2, 2017
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