Is it better to love and lose or never to love?
When people are falling in love, their heart is fulfilled by refreshment. On the contrary, should their love be broken, only their heart will be numbed. To my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of last time when I fell in love. However, as far as I am concerned, both to love and lose and never to love are so anguished, bitter and droopy unavoidably that I cannot choose which one is better. Eventually, it was not word “LOVE” that they always said with their beloved before damaging one piecemeal among remains of sorrow.
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Is it better to love and have lost or never to have loved?
When people are falling in love, their hearts are filled with joy. On the contrary, should their love be broken, their hearts would become numb. In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten how it feels to fall in love. However, as far as I am concerned, to love, to lose and to never love are all so anguished, bitter, and unavoidable that I cannot choose ["decide" would fit here better than choose, but choose works] which one is worse [because your adjectives are all negative, I think "worse" fits here better than "better" - but "better" sounds good and natural]. [What you are trying to say in this final sentence is a bit unclear.] Eventually though, it is not the word “LOVE” that is said to their loved ones when the relationship is being broken into pieces.When people are falling in love, their hearts are filled with joy. On the contrary, should their love be broken, their hearts would become numb. In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten how it feels to fall in love. However, as far as I am concerned, to love, to lose and to never love are all so anguished, bitter, and unavoidable that I cannot decide which one is worse. Eventually though, it is not the word “LOVE” that is said to their loved ones when the relationship is being broken into pieces.
Keep writing! You are doing such a great job! If you ever want to do a Thai/English exchange, let me know.
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Is it better to love and lose, or never to love?
When people are falling in love, their hearts are filled with refreshment. On the contrary, should their love be broken, their hearts will be numbed. In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of the last time when I fell in love. However, as far as I am concerned, both to love and lose and never to love are so unavoidably anguished, bitter and droopy that I cannot choose which one is better. Eventually, it is not the word “LOVE” that they say to their loved ones before being broken completely into pieces.Corrected Annotated>
Is it better to love and lose, or never to love?
When people are falling in love, their hearts is are fulfilled by with refreshment. On the contrary, should their love be broken, only their hearts will be numbed. To In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of the last time when I fell in love. However, as far as I am concerned, both to love and lose, and never to love are so unavoidably anguished, bitter and droopy unavoidably that I cannot choose which one is better. Eventually, it was is not word “LOVE” that they always said say with to their beloved ones before damaging one piecemeal among remains of sorrow. being broken completely into pieces.
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Is it better loving and losing, or never to love?
When people fall in love, their hearts are filled with joy. However, when they fall out of love, their hearts will be numb. In my mind, it seems sort of hard to know what love is as I have forgotten those feelings of the last time when I fell in love. As far as I am concerned, loving and losing, and never to love are both similarly full of anguish, bitterness and pain that I cannot choose which one is better. In the end, it is not the word 'love' that is whispered in the ears of their loved ones when the relationship is being broken completely into pieces.
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