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Hi EveryOne,
My name is Paulo. I'm from Brazil. I'm married and we have one son.
My day started at 5:30 AM, when we did wake up, take a shower and after, we take breakfast. My son and I, out of our house at 7:00 AM, to take my son go to school and I go to my job.
My son stay in the school the entire day.
I work as IT Manager at the instituicion that care of children with cancer.
At the 5:00PM, I am going to take my son at school to go to our house.
I need help you to correct my text above. Thank you guys.
Correction:
Hi everyone,
My name is Paulo. I'm from Brazil, and I am happily married and we have a son.
I start my day with a shower at 5:30 AM. After showering, my family and I eat breakfast. At 7:00 AM, I take my son to school and then go to my job as an IT Manager at a children cancer institution. At 5:00 PM, I pick my son up from school and then head home.