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Hi EveryOne,

Correction:

Hi everyone,

My name is Paulo. I'm from Brazil, and I am happily married and we have a son.

I start my day with a shower at 5:30 AM. After showering, my family and I eat breakfast. At 7:00 AM, I take my son to school and then go to my job as an IT Manager at a children cancer institution. At 5:00 PM, I pick my son up from school and then head home.

My day today

My day started at 5:30 AM, when we did wake up, take a shower and after, we take breakfast. My son and I, out of our house at 7:00

AM, to take my son go to school and I go to my job..

My day started at 5:30 AM when I wake up, after I take a shower and and  I have breakfast.I and my son go out at 7:00AM.

My son stay in the school the entire day.=>ok

I work as IT Manager at the instituicion that care of children with cancer.=>ok

At the 5:00PM, I am going to take my son at school to go to our house.

At  the 5:00 PM  I take my son at the school and we go  home.

I need help you to correct my text above. Thank you guys.

Olá Paulo: eu escrevi da forma como eu escreveria, não sei também se esta certo. Seria interesante que alguém mais gabaritado corrigisse nós dois .... vamos manter contato .. estou aprendendo também.. espero que não tenha ficado chateado com a minha intromissão Um abraço Waldir.