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  • Corrected

    A storm

    The sky is dark,

    It is  thundering and  raining so hard.

    Several crows are flying away and in the air there are dog's barks.

    Trees are swing in the strong wind as if they had their own will,

    A spring storm has come and I wish the pedestrians with all good luck.


    I tried to keep the original meaning of this poem  unchanged , and just added some modifications ~if there is any error ~ please correct , hope we can make some good progress together ~

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    April 30, 2017
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    April 30, 2017
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    i think the key point is that when the effective date is , if you can find some informtion about this date according to the entire context, it ill be easier to understand... hope this can help ~
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    April 29, 2017
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    The fist question: The inner quality and the social status of a person cannot be reflected by what he wears About "based on", your second sentence is more appropriate,I think. Hope this can help ... BTW, I m a English learner... Have a good day!
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    April 25, 2017
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