A storm
The sky is dark.
It thunders.It is raining heavily.
Several crows are flying away very quikly.
Trees are swing in the strong wind as if they had their own will.
A spring storm has come.
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A storm
The sky is dark.It thunders. It rains heavily.
Several crows fly away very quickly.
Trees sway in the strong wind as if they had their own will.
A spring storm has come.
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A storm
The sky is dark.It thunders. It is raining heavily.
Several crows are flying away very quickly.
Trees are swinging in the strong wind as if they had (better: from or of) their own will.
A spring storm has come.
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A storm
The sky is dark,
It is thundering and raining so hard.
Several crows are flying away and in the air there are dog's barks.
Trees are swing in the strong wind as if they had their own will,
A spring storm has come and I wish the pedestrians with all good luck.
I tried to keep the original meaning of this poem unchanged , and just added some modifications ~if there is any error ~ please correct , hope we can make some good progress together ~
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Carolinaさん Thank you for your comment and corrections.It makes me happy!
韻文は好きです。でも書くのは難しい…。
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Linfordさん
Thank you for your comment and corrections! I am very glad!
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