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Hi! I'm a university student, studying biology, psychology, and Spanish! I'm looking for a language partner who can proofread my final essay for a Latin American literature class I'm in - I need to do well on my essay to pass the class :) Hola! Soy estudiante de universidad, y estudio biología, psicología, y español. Busco un compañero que pueda corregir mi ensayo final para mi clase de la literatura latinoamericana - necesito sacar una buena nota en este ensayo para pasar la clase. :)
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    Sports lessons at schools.

    Nowadays students are stressed due to the exams or the homework that they must to do. One effective way to clean clear their mind is by doing sports. However, this is a bit complicated because of they haven't (or: the don't have) enough free time. Therefore, they should have daily sports lessons at schools.

    They should have sports lessons in order to learn why it is important to have a healthy lifestyle and what's more, how to get it. They also learn to set goals and this will improve them their self-esteem. In addition that, doing sports at school helps the students to concentrate more during the other lessons.

    To sum up (or: To summarize), I think that have having daily sports lessons is essential to help students to be more confident with themselves. This will do make them better and happier persons people.

    Note: while "persons" is technically grammatically correct, it is never used in speech - usually only in official documents or contracts.

    Additionally, where I have added "or: _____", it is a suggestion to make the phrase sound more natural (but the original is technically correct as well)


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    Working in hospital as a nurse

    Honestly, I've been working in the health care sector since I graduated from university. I've thought of leaving my career and shifting to a different professional for a while. However, I do not put into participation I haven't decided to do this, and the reason for this is that I am used the income, which is higher than the average salary in Taiwan. It seems to me that the motivation of leaving my nursing career is becoming more strong stronger than ever before. I wonder what I can do if I am going to learn a new skill with a proper salary.
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    Hotel reservation

    Recently I finished my project at work and decided to have some R&R. The idea of spending a few days out of the city looked pretty nice to me. I'd never booked a hotel room by the phone, but that time I gave it a try. The reservation agent was really friendly and polite. He asked me whether I wanted to book a room in downtown or  a waterfront location. Since I am the a fan of the sea, lakes and rivers, I chose the latter. After a long conversation on the phone a standard room was booked. It was a non-smoking room with a courtyard view, that overlooks the pool. I can't wait for the first day of my vacation.
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    A trip to Thailand

    I`m going to Thailand with my girlfriends next Wednesday. We have been friends since we were in high school.
    We met in Tokyo 16 years ago, and we spent four years together in Japan during high school. It was a great time.
    We want to celebrate that we have known each other for 16 years. So we decided to travel Thailand!
    I live in Shanghai now, so we will meet in Shanghai first, then go to Thailand together.
    I'm sure it must will be a nice trip for us!
    I can't wait anymore.


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