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A sample of IELTS task 2 essay. Could you assess my writing?
There is a school of thought that believes universities should accept similar numbers of males and females in every subject. There are many arguments to be made against this notion as will we'll now be discussed.
Primarily, there is no educational benefit to result from such idea. In addition, it would be a complex procedure for the universities to organize the application process because it is influenced by other factors such as students' choice and their grades. For instance, many universities have specific requirements for the students to be eligible to join such as their grades in high school or students who plans to take a specialty major in their fields, their previous degrees are very essential. Therefore, some people believes it would be unfair if a male, for example, is disqualified because the available seats required for males in this course had fulfilled while a female student could secure a place in the course even if her grades is are lower than her male colleague.
There is a clear additional reason related to some surveys that shows there is are different subjects are popular and more suitable to a specific gender than the other. For example, researchers reveals that a large percentage of males like to study professions related to outdoors activities such as engineering. Whereas a large proportion of females like professions such as nursing, and secretary organising which does not include much a lot of physical activity. According to the fact that opting a subject in the university differs significantly between males and females, it makes it very difficult to have an equal number of both sexes who would like to study the same subject.
In brief short, there are several factors that affect students' choice of their subject in university, hence it is not recommended for the university to accept an equal number of males and females in every subject.0 votedApril 19, 20171Could you please correct my task 1 IELTS writing?
The line graph illustrates a number of electricity units needed daily in every house in England in winter and summer while the pie chart reveals four sections describing the main methods by which the electricity is used in every household.
It is clear from the graph that the maximum amount of electricity used is recorded at approximately 45000 unit which has been used in winter between 21 and 24 hours every day. Whereas the least amount of electricity units recorded in winter is slightly over 30000 which is recorded between 6 and 9 hours. On the other hand, as shown by the graph the summit of electricity used is 20000 between 12 and 15 hours while the the least amount of electricity units used is 12000 at 9 hours.
As illustrated by the pie chart, the most common cause form of electricity consumption is by heating rooms and heating water, amounted amounting to 52.5%. Whereas the most common cause form is ovens, kettles and washing machines. and t The percentage of electricity consumed by "lighting, tv, radio" and "vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools" is the same accounted accounting for 15%.
To sum it up, the demand of for electricity in winter is greater than in summer in England, consequently, the predominant cause of electricity consumption is through heating rooms and water as shown by the chart.0 votedApril 16, 20172Main Points of Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Jobs Essay
Advantages:
- the main advantage is: don not you don't need to spend money and time commuting to work and back home
- some people can be more productive working from home; it is more suitable for areas where workers do not need to communicate too often
- fewer distractions from colleagues or other factors in the work environment
- saves time that can be spend spent for with family or doing other activities
Disadvantages:
- having to work from home has some disadvantages
- even if communication between colleagues is possible, it is difficult to establish strong connections with them because of distance
- it is believed that better ideas comes when there is teamwork, but in the case of online work it is less possible0 votedApril 16, 20172- When To Use 'An' and When To Use 'A' This is a common mistake amongst non-English speakers. Many confuse the use of 'an' and 'a' so I'll be explaining it here. 'an' is only used before a word beginning with a vowel (a, e, u, i, o) eg:- an Elephant. an Apple. an Orange. an Umbrella. an Ice cube. 'a' is used before consonants (b, c, d, f, g, h, j, k, l, m, n, p, q, r, s, t, v, w, x, y, z) NOTE: 'an' is not used before the letter 'H', a lot of my Italian friends make this mistake. 'H' is not a vowel, it's a consonant. The only time you use 'an' before 'H' is when the 'H' is silent. eg:- an hOur. There are a few exceptions to the rule above. We don't say 'an university', we say 'a university' but mostly because the U in university is pronounced as 'yew' not as a vowel. This may look confusing but if you read a lot of English books, you'll never make these mistakes. I hope this helps.April 16, 201711
Please help me to correct my essay!
Today's topic is body language. As we all know, nonverbal communication plays an important role in a conversation.But different gestures mean different things in different countries. As for today's entry, I'd like to introduce some unique body languages in China to you.
If you saw two girls walking hand in hand on the street or in school or any other place, don't be surprised.They are not lesbians, but good friends.They use 'hand in hand' to show how close they are. That's quite common in China, especially for teens. Speaking of this, foreigners are confused by the intimacy between two men because they put their hands in on each other's shoulders.The truth is this gesture also means we they are good friends.
Stamp Stomping your foot probably means you're impatient in western countries. In China, it's a sign of anger or regret. Especially when girls are very angry, they have no choice but to stamp stomp their foot, because they can't fight. Next time when you talk to a girl who is stamping stomping her foot, please leave her alone.When Chinese are full they touch and pat their stomach gently. This is really a classic action.
In my opinion one of the most important gestures in China is we use two hands to send or receive a gift or a red packet. It reprensents respect. My parents taught me this polite manner when I was a little girl and I will pass it down to my children in the future.0 votedApril 15, 20171Talking with my roommate
Yesterday, I and my new roommate and I talked for more than one an hour. She's one year younger than me, came from Beijing same to like my boyfriend. In order to improve her English skills, She came to British Britain for one a year, which it caused cost her lower salary and long distance with her newlywed husband. However, after she was staying in british Britain for 2 weeks, she found not didn't find any improvement in her English due to working and living with Chinese people. So she was sad.
I recommended she should have take on some new hobbies and take part in local activities or move out of her dormitory to live with a local Briton. After that, you she could get to know many new friends and immerse herself in an English environment. Except those Besides that, it's same also important that you she should spend the rest of her time to studying it, learning grammar, remembering words, reciting sentences and patterns of specific expressions. I recommended the italki and 51talk to her which I was using.
In addition, she accepted the invitation to go to church with me this Sunday.
Good luck.0 votedApril 15, 20170"Explain why it is important for you to learn English."
It is very difficult to answer the question "Why it is important for you to learn English?". It's because my reason to learn English has been changing while I study English.
When I began to study English, I thought I need to learn a new skill to survive. At that time, I was sick and took time away from my school for a while to treat my depression. I was facing to a depressive crisis in my life, literally. So I decided to study learn a new language to change my world. Actually, the first language I tried to learn was Korean, because my ancestors are Korean. However, unfortunately, that trial was a terrible idea. The Korean language is too complex to pronounce for me. Then I changed my mind; I began to study the English that I had been studying in a high school class.
Now I keep on studying English and enjoying it regularly. I found learning other another language changes the areas which I can visit. For example, I traveled to San Diego and Hawaii by myself in spring break. I was not afraid of riding a bus, ordering meals in a restaurant and checking into a hotel. That is because I can speak English. Moreover, this experience gave me confidence. I no longer feel like a sad powerless girl. I can do anything that I want to do if I try.
The biggest importance of learning English may be a mental one for me. Being able to speak English breaks a the cage surrounding around me. It gives me the freedom not only physically but also mentally. I could survive in a whole new culture, situation and hardship. Also, I can be myself who is a hopeful and powerful woman.0 votedApril 15, 20172
