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A sample of IELTS task 2 essay. Could you assess my writing? There is a school of thought that believes universities should accept similar numbers of males and females in every subject. There are many arguments to be made against this notion as will now be discussed. Primarily, there is no educational benefit to be resulted from such idea. In addition, it would be a complex procedure for the universities to organize the application process because it is influenced by other factors such as students' choice and their grades. For instance, many universities have specific requirements for the students to be eligible to join such as their grades in high school or students who plans to take a specialty, their previous degrees are very essential. Therefore, some people believes it would be unfair if a male for example disqualified because the available seats required for males in this course had fulfilled while a female student could secure a place in the course even if her grade is lower than her male colleague. There is a clear additional reason related to some surveys that shows there is different subjects are popular and suitable to a specific gender than the other. For example, researches reveals that large percentage of males like to study profession related to outdoors activities such as engineering. Whereas large proportion of females like profession such as nursing, secretary which does not include much physical activity. According to the fact that shows opting a subject in the university differs significantly between males and females, makes it very difficult to have equal number of both sexes who would like to study the same subject. In brief, there are several factors that affect students' choice of their subject in university, hence it is not recommended for the university to accept equal number of males and females in every subject.

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A sample of IELTS task 2 essay. Could you assess my writing?

There is a school of thought that believes universities should accept similar numbers of males and females in every subject. There are many arguments to be made against this notion as will we'll now be discussed.

Primarily, there is no educational benefit to result from such idea. In addition, it would be a complex procedure for the universities to organize the application process because it is influenced by other factors such as students' choice and their grades. For instance, many universities have specific requirements for the students to be eligible to join such as their grades in high school or students who plans to take a specialty major in their fields, their previous degrees are very essential. Therefore, some people believes it would be unfair if a male, for example, is disqualified because the available seats required for males in this course had fulfilled while a female student could secure a place in the course even if her grades is are lower than her male colleague.

There is a clear additional reason related to some surveys that shows there is are different subjects are popular and more suitable to a specific gender than the other. For example, researchers reveals that a large percentage of males like to study professions related to outdoors activities such as engineering. Whereas a large proportion of females like professions such as nursing, and secretary organising which does not include much a lot of physical activity. According to the fact that opting a subject in the university differs significantly between males and females, it makes it very difficult to have an equal number of both sexes who would like to study the same subject.

In brief short, there are several factors that affect students' choice of their subject in university, hence it is not recommended for the university to accept an equal number of males and females in every subject.
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