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    我的旅行!

    我去萨拉曼卡已经六年了。我从特尼里弗去。我去了五个天。I do not know what you mean

     我跟我的同学一起出去结识 we usually don't use this word because it is too formal,if you want to say make new friends,try to use 认识新朋友人
    我睡觉住在他们的家,因为旅馆非常贵。
    他们给我们做我们的饭,可是我没把他们的饭吃了。他们做饭做得不好吃。who?在萨拉曼卡沃参观大教堂。what?好极了!
    萨拉曼卡很大和很漂亮。也楼楼也很多,可是但是东西和礼物 (礼物 is a kind of 东西)非常贵。
    我想回再去(because you are not come from there)那儿,因为我要参观地方多。

    hope it is helpful 

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    April 13, 2017
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