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    工作的时候

    我很喜欢我工作的地方,同事亲切友好,工作氛围和谐,在工作上我总是尽到自己的责任。

    (一般亲切友好是描述人的;“尽自己责任”和氛围没什么关系,不宜放在一个句子中。)

    我很担心我不符合要求,并为此感到着急,但这心情其实毫无根据。我的经理有时候表扬我,因为我很努力地工作,我很高兴。

    (注意因果关系)


    我的同事们都是很可爱的。如果我有问题他们总是帮助我。即使我没问问题,他们也主动帮忙。两天前,上级安排大家一起去旅行。我看到很漂亮的风景,度过了很有意思的时光。我觉得跟我的同事们在一起很重要,感觉到了合作精神!我很喜欢我工作的地方!

    (这一段写得不错!)

    (我用手机帮你修改,不会使用highlight等功能,见谅!)

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    August 14, 2017
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    (1) greeny's views on city construction Some views on the book” ten years" It's about Beijing’s constructions starting from 1950 to 2005. Liang and Chen planned the architectures and roads followed a notion, multi-centers city and traditional area protection. However, the authority didn't adopt their plans, furthermore they looked Liang’s advices as traditional bad things. I’ve been to Gugong several months ago. I felt uncomfortable when I took the all view pictures of temples. The skyscrapers and strange building outlines appearing in the sky made a sharp contrast to temples. As Liang’s predictions said, Beijing is suffering traffic problems because of one-center construct plans. My friend from Shanghai is now travelling in Beijing. She said she couldn't feel the Beijing style. She's right. Hutongs are destroyed and old districts are replaced with unordered modern buildings. An American expert said, Beijing became a secondhand city. Authority wanted to develop the country at high speed and always looked over on the treasures we had for thousand years. Merchants always focused on the profits and didn't obey the construction rules. Fortunately, the authority starts to realize the problems of city development. Xiongan area is being under development. I find there are polices standing guard in Hutongs. That's all my feelings.
    August 14, 2017
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    I love tennis I attended a tennis tournament on today's morning representing my department. It's a pity that I didn't grasp many chances and made a lot of mistakes on the competition site. Of course, my skill is also left behind other competitors. I've played tennis for almost 2 years. Tennis requires for strength and speed. I wonder how can some slender men play tennis very well, whose limbs are as slim as chopsticks. If you are also interested in playing tennis, welcome chatting with me!
    April 8, 2017
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