Thank you all, very helpful!

Thanks for all the comments, really helpful!

My favorite childhood memory

My favorite childhood memory is of my cousins, my sister and I, playing a dangerous game at my grandmother’s house. It was about 10 years ago., at that point, I was 12 years old then. We created a challenge rules, steps to follow and two teams. Here are the steps: Step one drink a huge glass of water, step two ride on a super small bicycle until you reach the big tree, step three making a jump to the tree branch, step four untie a knot on a rope and the last step making the leap as far as possible.

Off I went, I drunk the whole glass of water. It was so hard. Then I ran fast to the little bicycle, when I just started to ride the bicycle and I fell on the floor, it was so painful. My legs were in pain. I saw some blood running over my skin. I am competitive, so I cleaned all the blood and sand that are in my body were in the cut quickly. I did not give up, unlike it I said “I am going to start over new, I can do it‘’ I always take all games so seriously. I had to drink the water again. I was so full, and then it was even worse than the first glass. My team did all we could do and the other one team did it all too. I had a lot of fun, but you know what, we did it faster, it was the main rule to win that game and we did it, big winners.

Good job!

*just watch out for using commas and full stops. A , means a slight pause but you will carry on.

A . means the end of that sentence and you can go on to talk about something else.

A lot of the time you've used commas at the end of your sentences.

I don't like sports

I have been learning some new phrasal verbs for the past one month and I would like to practice it a little bit.
Today my friend invited me to go to the gym to work out with him but I am so lazy! When I was a child I used to avoid volleyball training. I have never been a big fan of sports at all. I used to study from 1 pm in the afternoon and I always woke up late because sometimes I forgot to set my alarm and so it didn't go off. It made me lazier indeed.
Back in 2002, I learned Capoeira in Brazil which is a sport coming from Africa that makes you go upside down many times!
Nowadays the only exercise that I do is going to an Irish dancing class on Thursdays and I have so much fun. I am the youngest person in the class but actually, it is not a kind of class that attract many young people which doesn't really matter to me. I do love the Irish culture and I am very interested in learning more and more about it.

Sounds good Aline!

*Where you used: call my volleyball classes off

this would suggest you're in charge of the volleyball classes and cancelled them all. Which I don't think you'd quite be running as a child ;)

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It sounds fine :)