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My favorite childhood memory My favorite childhood memory is my cousins, my sister and I playing a dangerous game at my grandmother’s house. It was about 10 years ago, at that point, I was 12 years old. We created a challenge, rules, steps e two teams. Here are the steps: Step one drinking a huge glass of water, step two riding on a super small bicycle until a big tree, step three making a jump to the Tree branch, step four untie a knot on a rope and the last step making the leap as far as possible. I had to begin that, I drunk the whole glass of water, It was so hard, then I ran fast into the little bicycle, when I just started riding the bicycle and I fell on the floor, It was so painful, My legs was in pain, I saw some blood running over my skin. I am competitive, So I cleaned all the blood and sand that are in my body quickly, I did not give up, unlike it I said “I am going to start over new, I can do it‘’ I used to take all games so serious. I had to drink the water again I was so full, and then it was even worse than the first glass. My team did all we should do and the other one team did it all too. I had a lot of fun, but you know what, we did it faster, it was the main rule to win that game and we got it, big winners.

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My favorite childhood memory

My favorite childhood memory is of my cousins, my sister and I, playing a dangerous game at my grandmother’s house. It was about 10 years ago., at that point, I was 12 years old then. We created a challenge rules, steps to follow and two teams. Here are the steps: Step one drink a huge glass of water, step two ride on a super small bicycle until you reach the big tree, step three making a jump to the tree branch, step four untie a knot on a rope and the last step making the leap as far as possible.


Off I went, I drunk the whole glass of water. It was so hard. Then I ran fast to the little bicycle, when I just started to ride the bicycle and I fell on the floor, it was so painful. My legs were in pain. I saw some blood running over my skin. I am competitive, so I cleaned all the blood and sand that are in my body were in the cut quickly. I did not give up, unlike it I said “I am going to start over new, I can do it‘’ I always take all games so seriously. I had to drink the water again. I was so full, and then it was even worse than the first glass. My team did all we could do and the other one team did it all too. I had a lot of fun, but you know what, we did it faster, it was the main rule to win that game and we did it, big winners.


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