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    A e-mail I sent to my forign teacher today. Please have a look for mistakes The reason of this e-mail is the loss of my earphone which is a little bit expensive for me. Dear Shaun: I am one of your students in Eng 1A and I went to your lab and tutorial class in 14:30-16:30, 2017.04.01. Unfortunately, I lost my earphone that afternoon. I recalled that I picked it in my bag but had not take it out. I have no idea how it can be lost. May it was fell out in T401 or T516 but the teaching building was locked in this holiday, I cannot get in to find. Have you seen my earphone when you put the things in order after we have gone in T516? It was in a small black box. I am terrible sorry to bother you but please help me. (If there is any grammatical mistake please pay no attention to it....) Best wishes for you, sincerely yours, Derrick
    April 3, 2017
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    来从俄罗斯女诗人谈起。

    XX世纪前在俄罗斯文学中没有女性的作家和或诗人,但是从XIX世纪末以来很多女生开始对诗艺感兴趣。为什么这种现象得到了传播(这种情况开始流行起来 may be better)?最重要的一个原因是妇女运动,它关于关注(关于=about   关注=focus on)解决妇女教育和参加社会生活的问题。俄罗斯帝国和然后之后成立的苏联政府实行了多方面的改革。那时候改革的重点是支持性别平等,破坏父全制父权制的传统,并促进妇女解放的过程。最有名的俄罗斯女诗人安娜•阿赫玛托娃写下了这样一段话:“我教女生们大声说话。。。// 天啊,怎么迫使他们再沉默不语?”
    俄罗斯女诗人的作品(风格)以两个趋势为主:模仿男诗人的文体和表示表达女性的特点。第一个组类型的代表是玛琳娜·茨维塔耶娃, 她总是强调,她是男诗人的同行,甚至于不让别人叫她“女诗人”。这是她写的一首诗歌:

    青春
    我的青春,我那异己的
    青春!我的一只不配对的靴子!
    眯缝起一对红肿的眼睛,
    就这样撕扯着一页页日历

    (汪剑钊 译)    ←  amazing!
    第二个组(类别)的代表是丽玛•哥萨克福,维罗妮卡•图舍诺娃和我已经谈(写/说)到的安娜·阿赫玛托娃。这些女诗人在她们的作品中主要描写女人的生命,她的感受,希望和梦想。

    对就俄罗斯女诗人写的诗歌题目来说而言(就...而言),他们都很五花八门(五花八门is used to describe there are so many kinds of something or the variations of something are changing constantly. In this sentence, the topics of poem are all the same kind: topics)。在女诗人的文艺创作我们可以找到他们住所在的时代的踪迹。比如说,苏联参加第二次世界大战的时候,她们选择了若干很不容易(usually will not use it to describe the topic)的主旨:奋斗,勇气和死亡。1939-1945年战线,不管这里有危险的条件无论这里的条件多么危险,女生们都去当护士,大夫和士兵。因此她们鼓励女诗人写阳刚的诗歌。

    当然还有相反的题目,跟安静的日子和普通女生生活有关系。女人天天想什么?就是男人,爱情,家庭,和平等等。比如说,安娜•阿赫玛托娃写的我最喜欢的一首诗:

    我们俩不会道别,
    肩并肩走个没完。
    已经到了黄昏时分,
    你沉思,我默默不言。

    (乌兰汗 译)

    女诗人在俄罗斯文学中的地位是一个争论具有争议的问提。不过,事实就是事实 (this sentence is useless can be delete),女生也会有绣肠 (I dont understand this word)。


    你写的真好!你的中文已经具有很高的水平!

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    April 3, 2017
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    An English Writing Attempt (by the way, find a penfriend if you want) I am a Year one student in an university in Shanghai, China. My major is Electronic information science and technology. In general, common Chinese students will not be acquired a very high English degree unless they want to be a postgraduate student. However, my major is special one which is a cooperation subject with Britian. In other word, the teachers and professors even the headmaster in our college are foreigners. It is a big challenge for me. In order to get the drift of what the teachers give in the lecture and ask the questions about subjects, I have no choice to improve my English. Most of Chinese students including me have the same problem in learning English, which is they have learnd many vocabularies but cannot use them even in a prttey simple conversation. As far as I am concerned, I have learned English for 10 years and I can make some sentences in some "complicated structures" (in a beginner degree to say), though I know they looks very strange in your eyes. But what annoies myself is I cannot express myself correctly in an idiomatic way. Therefore, I desire to improve my English somehow at this aspect which can make my language not be strange any more. Fortunately, I found this website last night and I am trying to test if it is useful for me. I know what I wrote is a little bit long but I would appreciate it if someone could help me to correct it. Also, I want to find a penfriend who is learning Chinese so that we can help each other mutually(Also we can talk in Skype). Doubtlessly Ican speak a fluent Chinese as a person living in China! Thaks all !!!
    April 2, 2017
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