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A e-mail I sent to my forign teacher today. Please have a look for mistakes The reason of this e-mail is the loss of my earphone which is a little bit expensive for me. Dear Shaun: I am one of your students in Eng 1A and I went to your lab and tutorial class in 14:30-16:30, 2017.04.01. Unfortunately, I lost my earphone that afternoon. I recalled that I picked it in my bag but had not take it out. I have no idea how it can be lost. May it was fell out in T401 or T516 but the teaching building was locked in this holiday, I cannot get in to find. Have you seen my earphone when you put the things in order after we have gone in T516? It was in a small black box. I am terrible sorry to bother you but please help me. (If there is any grammatical mistake please pay no attention to it....) Best wishes for you, sincerely yours, Derrick

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Dear Shaun:
I am one of your students in Eng 1A and I went to your lab and tutorial class  on April 1st at 14:30-16:30. Unfortunately, I lost my earphones  that afternoon. I recall that I put them in my bag, but didn't take them out. I have no idea how they are lost! Maybe  they fell out in T401 or T516, but I couldn't check the building because it was locked for holiday. Did you see my earphones when you picked up after we finished  the T516 class? My earphones were in a small black box.

I am terribly sorry to bother you, but please help me.  Best wishes!

Sincerely,
Derrick


earphones- plural noun- use the verb "they"

Be careful with "is" and "was"

I would love to help you with your English. You may try profesional class with me soon!

Best,

Ms. Morgan

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