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Hi - my name is Kae and I am from the US. I love to travel and learn about other cultures and I am looking to practice my Spanish and can help you with your English. Hablemos!
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    After a Master's Degree in the USA.

    After completing my <font color="#ff00ff">studies</font> <strike>study</strike> in the USA, I want to return to my country and continue doing research to promote <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">health technology</font><font style="background-color: inherit;">*.</font> I would also like to teach other people in Latin America to become more self-sufficient <strike><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">,</font></strike><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"> </font>and improve access to healthcare, which <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">can</font>**  help millions of people who currently have no access. I want to continue to expand my knowledge in <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">this</font> <strike>the</strike> area because we can always<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"> be better**</font>.


    <font color="#ff00ff">*"Health technology" doesn't sound natural - I would say "technology in the healthcare sector"</font>

    <font color="#ff00ff">**"Could" sounds better here instead of "can". "Could" denotes a open-ended possibility while "can" is more direct. It's a subtle difference however. </font>

    <font color="#ff00ff">*** "we can always continue to improve"
    </font>

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    April 13, 2017
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    Help.

    Hi, there

    Could you help me with a few questions?

    1) Would you say "Not with all the soap in the world, nor/or with all the cosmetics will these wrinkles ever go away" Can I use nor/or here? Or should I say "Neither with all the soap in the world, nor with all the cosmetics will these wrinkles ever go away"? <font color="#0000ff">[KB] nor/or can be used here, "or" sounds better.  You can also say, "All the soap and cosmetics in the world still won't make these wrinkles go away."</font>

    2) I found this sentence in an article: "There is no masterpiece that has not an aggressive character"... Why "has not an".. Should;t it be "There is no masterpiece that DOESN'T have an aggressive character"? <font color="#0000ff" style="background-color: inherit;">[KB] I think this is technically correct but it sounds really weird and I would never use that as a way of phrasing the </font><font color="#0000ff" style="background-color: inherit;">sentence, so you're right in your thinking. </font>

    Thank you!
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    April 4, 2017
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    Description of a house

    I can see a big house. In the middle of the house, there is a white door. The door has got a strange handle in the middle.
    At the top of the door, there's a quote <font style="background-color: yellow;">that I cannot read.</font> <strike>I cannot read it</strike>. Next to the door on the right there's a big window with small <font style="background-color: yellow;">shutters</font>, these small <font style="background-color: yellow;">shutters </font>can be closed <strike>by safe</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">for security</font>. Through the glass I can see an old window covering.
    <strike>On</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">To</font> the left of the door, there are <strike>separate</strike> <strike>other</strike> two <font style="background-color: yellow;">separate</font> windows. These are smaller than the first window.
    The roof of the house is brown and <strike>light</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">is slightly</font> leaning. In the middle of the roof there is a chimney.
    In front of the house there is a hedge and a small blue sign.
    Behind the house there are trees.

    I just describe<font style="background-color: yellow;">d</font> a house.
    Thanks.
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    April 4, 2017
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