After a Master's Degree in the USA.
After completing my study in the USA, I want to return to my country and continue doing research to promote health technology. I would also like to teach other people in Latin America to become more self-sufficient, and improve access to healthcare, which can help millions of people who currently have no access. I want to continue to expand my knowledge in the area because we can always be better.
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After a Master's Degree in the USA.
After completing my studies*"Health technology" doesn't sound natural - I would say "technology in the healthcare sector"
**"Could" sounds better here instead of "can". "Could" denotes a open-ended possibility while "can" is more direct. It's a subtle difference however.
*** "we can always continue to improve"
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After a Master's Degree in the USA.
After completing my study in the USA, I want to return to my country and continue doing research to promote health technology. I would also like to teach other people in Latin America to become more self-sufficient, and improve access to healthcare, which can help millions of people who currently have no access. I want to continue to expand my knowledge in the area because we can always be better.Everything is correct, but I would say, " who currently have none".
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