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- The google translation to English for the Chinese phrase (磁性的"聲音) is magnetic sound. Maybe try to google the words to help you understand the meaning, but the context in which you use the words is important too; as they could be construed as affectionate. But if you liked him you could say, "I think you have a magnetic voice and you are charming and attractive". I think this would be appropriate.0 votedApril 20, 20173
We won this match
Today, China's national football team beat South Korea's team. It was very important for us to win this match. Not only because Korea is one of the best football teams in Asia, but alsomany things happen between China and Korea these days. Many Chinese people expected that match. When China won, I could see the news in everywhere. Everybody was very happy and we were proud ofthe players. Even if I am not in China, I can image how happy they are, and I am proud of my country too. There were many people who said China's football team is too weak. But I always believed we are the best one! And I believe those players will prove they can make it!Good job! Some grammar and punctuation is not easy for English speakers too. LOl
0 votedMarch 23, 20170A Bite of China
Many folks prefer western fast food, such as McDonald's and KFC, but I am particularly appreciative of traditional Chinese food. Comparing with the types of french fries and hamburgers of Western food, Chinese food emphasizes a balance, thus it can be called healthy food. Additionally, sauteed foods cook at low heat, and braised foods cook even without grease.
In 2008, Harvard University's medical academy of professor Davin Huge, indicated that China had a long history of food nutrition, and it's cuisine was based on fruits, vegetables and beans, and this set an outstanding example for the world.
In addition, Chinese cuisine is more symbolic for Chinese culture, and China is more active on the world stage. For this reason, Chinese cuisine is accepted naturally by more and more people. Consequently, there are over 50,000 restaurants in America and approximately 12% of the English population eat Chinese food at least once a week. There is no surprise, that we can see many situations in American TV series roles, that actors carry a square box to eat Chinese food take-out.
On one side, we should be proud of our culture of traditional food; on the other side side, we are required to make efforts to improve, because it is grief to see that we fail with an immateriality culture bequest of the world. From my own perspective, the contributor is, that when we are cooking, we add too many seasonings such as monosodium glutamate and lard. The other part is that we lack creativity, which means our taste is not suitable for most foreigners. It can be seen clearly that we need to adjust from our original cooking style, and at the same time the changes should not harm our ability to express our traditional skills and cultures.Not too sure about all the comma placement, did my best to research. Good Job Laffee. :)
0 votedMarch 19, 20170Would you like to revise my English composition?
Should women return to the kitchen?
With the development of society, there are increasingly more women going outside the home to be working mothers. But as a matter of fact, some people still think that women should return to the kitchen where they should work.Among these people, some consider women are suitable for looking after family because of their patience, carefulness, and blindness. They can teach children how to do some housework and take care of themselves well. The others also think, the breadwinners work hard and even work overtime or second jobs to earn more money to support their families. Some people also believe the breadwinners are supposed to have a comfortable, cozy and relaxed environment which women create at home after working all day.
We know the above, but we don't know household women suffer from inner pains such as loneliness and a lack confidence. We might think they are happy for a simple life, in which they don't need to work hard in a company, and just do cooking, cleaning, picking up children, shopping, etc . But to tell the truth, women have to stay at home for their families and haven't got their own salary, so some people might not show the same respect for her as for her husband.
Besides, we can't waste the wealth of gifts that women contribute to society. They ought not to lose their social class. There are a large quantity of jobs needed to be done by women not men, such as confinement nurse. If women return to the kitchen, the development of society will be slower than before due the to decline of competitive power in the workforce.
What's more, a father also can fulfill all a child's needs. Except for the qualities a mother has, a father also can explore, play riddles, climb mountains, etc and outside activities. If the mother works outside, the father can have much more time to stay with their children, and the family has double wages.
Last but not least, men will be not able to replace women. Women shouldn't return to the kitchen, this is beneficial to family and society.Notes:
the word "but" helps the reader understand that the next sentence is different or contrary to the first sentence.
starting paragraphs with words such as "besides" and "what's more" are correct and more casual, but not formal. But we use them all the time for speaking.
I may have used different sentence structure, but your writing is comprehensive. Good title :)
0 votedMarch 17, 20171
